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for His Lost Bride

by Roushijin

person angel
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow .. please please please please please update soon i would love to eread more ... later for now

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person blue
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey! its a good story. but im a little lost. wasn't lord sesshomaru the one to show up, not Jenshi. Is he coming representing Sessho, bc he says "What fool?! Sesshomaru could kill you!’" and the whole soldier setup and how everything is sorted out confuses me a bit. Like.. the way rin got to her father. idk. And why would Noki want to break the spell if she likes Lord Hitoshi? idk im sryyyy! ur stories are extremely good, they just got my head all mesed up right now.
person Femme Fatale
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is geting interesting. Looking foward to the next chapter!
person Alala Moon
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. Update. soon. I'll be waiting.
person Samantha[not signed in]
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it! please update soon, this is one of the best stories on this site. good job.
person animegirl007
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sesshomaru the only anime male ...I would bend my will to.....Rin's images of them together are hot......keep it coming please......
person Bandit
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!
Please up date soon!!!
person Ana
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. UPDATE SOON!
person sauncha
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the sexual tension in this story. It's also nice to see Rin as a demon in this AU. Please update soon! :)
person diego
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
are you sure you add something from the version you sent me....well anyway it good and you new that what i tough so well see ya next chapt...review soon...or I will kick your ass!