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UPDATE!!! IM BEGGING YOU!!!!!!!!! -glomps and doesnt let go till she updates-

lol, you go dude!, on the last chap. of gripping at people....lol, anyway, i enjoyed the story and hope that you will continue even though people are talking crap and being imature, and your right it is fiction, you can do anything you like, that's the beauty of it, so once more, you go an get 'em, lol, please continue.

Hi!

Read all three chapters of your fic and have enojoyed it so far. I do look forward to the next chapters of the story and you can e-mail me your next chpaters. I will read them and let you know what I think. Just put it in the e-mail.

wow the comeback is on and poppin
you tell the haters to back off
i find your story very pleasing
to read and i cant wait til you
update please do it soon!!!!!!!

WOOO You go Guy/Girl! Shut them people who do nothing but complain about others stories, and I agree, If your NOT AN AUTHOR then Shut up. *give a cookie to all and ONLY the autors.* Ok I said my rant.

* stares at Fluffy-sama* OMFG... So... wonderful... * wipes mouth* Oh, shit, anybody know how to get drool out of keyboards? imoto: * laughs at DoB* me: * defenestrates imoto* One of my favourite pasttimes... But, no offense, it just doesn't WORK to use "drop dead handdsome" in the Sengoku Jidai. First, it's not a phrase they'd know. Second, it's drop dead GORGEOUS, not handsome. And he's not handsome. If you want to say he's hot, or hott, or gorgeous, go ahead; in fact, that last one is the closest. You've read the manga, perhaps? Remember what Jakotsu told Renkotsu when they were discussing our man? Demon? Youkai? Yah.(Copyright © daughterofbastet 2004.)Anyway, please try not to use "oh my god!" or "wow" or "sucker!" or "such is life", etc. Which is a very sad thing, because I use that one all the time... which is perfectly acceptable, since all my fics are AU. French is so expressive.

Honey, tenshi means angel, and even if you want to have evil angels, that just doesn't fly with me: you have him gentle and easygoing, a fairly good man, yet on the field he's ruthless(I can totally accept that)and EVIL? I'm sorry, but that doesn't cut it. Also, voices don't CURVE. I'm going to bit a bit harsh on the other writers(other than me; I'm well aware I suck, so don't bother trying to surprise me with the news), so don't feel I'm just being critical to you. Like you need that kind of reassurance, butwhat the hell. Please try to keep in one tense: "You are a beautiful woman, now," her friend said, and she laughs. Ow. That just hurts.(It's an example, don't look at me that way.) Also: they don't HAVE dresses like that in that era. They don't even have kimono, they have a related kind of outfit, called yukata. It's considered rude and shocking to expose so much of a woman in public, even if she is a geisha or a prostitute, esepcially if she is of some political importance; Japanese women were never part of the "entertainment" unless it was soft speaking and looking pretty, or being shoved at some high-ranking official behind shoji walls. "Hell" was not a curse back then. It was a place, and if you want some Japanese curses, I'll be happy to give them to you.

* shrugs* Yeah, you did. I'm not complaining... about that, anyway. Patience is a virtue... Not right now, it isn't.(You probably don't get that. Forget it.)You still haveohmygodihavetogobye

I'm in a pile on my floor crying my heart out...the pain...oh the pain...I just can't go on....how could you do this to your devoted reader? How...could...you *falls to the ground in a heap wailing* *some heavenly voice* awe...poor mortal..

(please upate)

i really love this story. im looking forward to the next chapter. good work.