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schedule
January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...I think your stories are very original and I'm sorry some reviewers are mis-behaving themselves. Keep up the good work.
schedule
January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love.......this fiction! I was just reading you other story "What Lurks Beneath" and that is awesome too..(need to go and review that story to ^_^) I cant wait to hit the [->] next button and read your other chaps! Anyways just wanted you to know that you are doing great!
schedule
January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to let you know about Chapter 1 that it didn't take to long for Rin to come in the picture...althought I'm glad that I got to read more about Sesshy in this chapter! ^_~ [Love at first read!!!] Noki sounds JUST like my best friend Sacha...heheh...great job!
schedule
January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Inhale...Exhale...Let it go! Wow that was *HOT!* Were the really doing that or was that just in her mind??? Rin is a little --->Horny<--- Lol. But who could blame her? When you got that 6 foot something in front of ya??? Great job!
schedule
January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Right on! And you are most likely referring to daughterofbastet (WTF?) and I agree! Why would they come back if they didn't like it? I promise never to be a hater! Lol. Great...rules! ^//^
schedule
January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what a charming story, I enjoyed emensly. Please update whenever you have the time :P
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schedule
December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cute rules
the story is very good, I hope you write more soon. I look forward to reading more
the story is very good, I hope you write more soon. I look forward to reading more
schedule
November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude I love your stories, they are awesome but I will give a bit of advice, just ignore the retard. To tell you the truth, I was hit by the same exact person that gave you that comment. So just forget about it and move on, it's what I've been doing. Just droppin my two cents ^_^ Update soon \(^_^)
schedule
September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Reviewing Chapter One: Great Start! I do so enjoy your stories. I wish my muse was as active and inventive as yours.
schedule
September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Review Chapter 2: Well, the two have chemistry. I loved it when Rin went flying through the air! Next!