rate_review Reviews

are you going to finish this one i really liked it

I like.. I like alot. Perhaps Inu, Shiro, and Kags have a three way mate? That would be interesting

i love it

Oh no! heheh. More like, Oh yeah! Poor Rin. I hope that Sesshoumaru hasn't hurt her by the time they get there. Can't wait for the Sess chappie!

Snow

Ohayo! In chapter five, I felt kind of odd with Kagome climbing into bed with Shiro and Inuyasha. I'm not really one for OOC'ness. However, I lurve action, and that is what chapter six has. Oh yeah! Blood, guts and gore. OMG! Kouga got Shiro! And Inuyasha is probably about to get really pissed. And why is Sesshoumaru sick? Does it have to do with Inuyasha's thoughts of mating Shiro? Is Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru already mated, or Sesshoumaru and Shiro, and nobody but Sesshoumaru knows? So many questions! And Sango really pisses me off. She needs a good fuck by a demon. This was a cool chapter and I love your character, Shiro.

I'll certainly be watching for the next chapter.

Snow

I'm very interested in this story. I wonder, will Sango get over her hatred of demons and hanyous and get with Shiro? I wonder how Inuyasha will react upon seeing Shiro's house. I hope he doesn't think that Shiro was being selfish or something by not telling him where he lived and stuff.

when will the 6th ch. be up

I'm dieing to no i was happening it would be done be for my birthday guess not it in 2 days pleaseeeeeeee it driving me crazy

Of course I'd read your story...you were kind enough to read mine after all. I've only read the first chapter so far, but I really like how it starts out. You have a really original idea...and I'm a fan of Au's if they're the right cases...plus the opening scene was pretty hot. Keep up the good work!

What about Kagome and Inuyahsa????? why doesnt he want her as more than just a good lay???