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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!I love the storyline.
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Will you be continuing to add to this story? I like it and I'm hooked...please continue.
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sad but sweet. Where is the rest?
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very cute. I especially like the instincts, barking, and customs. I wonder what he heard her say?
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hah! I knew Sesshomaru would know how to handle the pup. Even if he didn't know he could. Hmm. She had a hanyou. Would she be 3/4 human or is there something about Kagome that allows for the exact species of the male she is with? Can she, perchance, have lots of pure inus to populate the world with cool deadliness? *innocent grin*
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The only thing I have a problem with is the paragraphs arn't seperated. Also when someone says something they should be seperate as well. But, other than that I really enjoyed reading it and I hope you continue.
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story you got to write soon ok!!??
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
In a couple of words "Spell Check"
Example:
"Wilting Cherry Blossoms
A few years have passed since Inuyasha's death Sesshoumaru wanders across a young female a small child with black raven ears. Angst,OC,WAFF"
Many will look at the errors in the summary alone and turn away from this story. Especially as the spelling and grammar errors only get worse in the story. Take pride in your work and at the very least run a spell and grammar check.
Example:
"Wilting Cherry Blossoms
A few years have passed since Inuyasha's death Sesshoumaru wanders across a young female a small child with black raven ears. Angst,OC,WAFF"
Many will look at the errors in the summary alone and turn away from this story. Especially as the spelling and grammar errors only get worse in the story. Take pride in your work and at the very least run a spell and grammar check.
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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. It has a great plot so far and I can't wait to see what you do for the rest of it. Please update soon.