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for Sacrifice

by AncientChineseProverb

person jen
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon !!!!!!
person Cochrann
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!!!!! I absolutely love this story! You've done a really good job in your portrayl of all the characters. I especially love how you've given Kagome a backbone and a sharp tongue to match Sesshoumaru's arrogant personality. I'll definitely be looking forward to your next chapter and take all the time you need - I know how it is as an author you want to get everything just right before posting it.
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol I got a lot of raised eyebrows when people read the summary of my story. lol maybe I should change it. I am so happy to hear that an author that I admire enjoys my story!!! I am soooo happy to hear I have Sesshy boy in character, I was kinda stressing on that. hehehe I wouldn't mind seeing sesshy in a tutu, I think it would be very interesting. I love your story Sacrifice and can't wait for more of it. I hope to see many more awesome stories from you and hope that it is sometime soon.(hint, hint) lol. I will update asap!
person mel
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Thanks for updating so fast. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep going!
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved the new chapter and can't wait for chapter 4. I love how long your chapters are....they are worth the wait.
person mel
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh good a new chapter soon! Just what I needed. Please update soon.
person media
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good start. I vote for a Sesshy/Kagome pairing. I just love that Taiyukai.
Excellent grammar.
person wynter89
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally they meet... i wonder what will happen to Kagome? i bet that inu yasha didnt escape either... stupid Kikyou, i'd rather send of a stranger then my own sister... no wonder ppl dont like her...
good luck
have fun writing the next chap.
person duke of spades
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like this is funny...but i wish you allowed more time for a relationship to form with kagome and inuyasha....where kikyo would have more reason to get rid of her competition. Plus i wonder why did the mikos allow kikyo to do such a thing as to give a fellow miko away.....kagome must have a lot of power if she is the next best thing. So i have voice my opinions and comments..update ....i will read next time!
person mel
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I admit that I am intrigued. Please update soon!