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for How Come

by ForGetMeNot

person pucie
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh wow, so much angst, I was getting emo and everything. . .very good. . .BRAVO!!
person crystal*brite
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i laughed,i cried,it was perfecto!
person Ami
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story! it was really great i hope you write more stories!!
person Anon
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg... these were both soooooooo cute.

so realistic to ACTUAL life... but there were a few lines and descriptions that confused me.

LOVED IT!
person emeraldoni
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Normally I love your stories but this really saddened me. It was full of drama. You should definitely continue this.
person red rose
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man the reviews here really hate Inuyasha though I can't blame them, in fact I agree with them ^ _ ^ He made his mate and family feel like second best.It is only fair that Kagome gets it on with someone else so that Inuyasha can feel like second best for once. Afte all Kagome always had to put up with his bullshit and always put him first. Since Inuyasha feels inferior to Seshoumaru why not let Kagome have an affair with the older brother. That would be hot. Go Sess/Kag!!!!!
person whorl
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read both one shots and wow. I really hate Kikyo, and Inuyasha is really a jerk to do that to Kagome. I know she forgave him but what about the next time Kikyo calls him? I would love to see Kagome retaliate against him by going to see Kouga and getting busy with the wolf demon at least once just so Inuyasha knows how Kagome felt every time he went off to Kikyo. I always get angry that Kagome never gets back at Inuyasha for things like this.
person psyched out
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
She is too forgiving. And the problem wasn't resolved. Perhaps a follow up one shot to see what happened? (hint hint)
person pensive
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really feel sorry for the kids, they always see their mom crying. How come they have never told their father that that is all their mother ever does.
person revenge is sweet
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This calls for payback! I don't care if he is sorry, Kagome should run into Seshoumaru and have a brief affair with him. Maybe even get pregnant by him, and have Inuyasha raise that child as his own. Now that would be perfect payback, and Inuyasha cannot say anything since he had betrayed her throughout their marriage. Man wiould that be great. Can you just see Inuyasha raising his brother's son.