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for August

by YourouzokuAlpha

person Bouken
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GOD DAMN!!!

You sure it's legal what ya do?!
I don't think so....

How can it be possibel to write such a good story in a first person sight?!!?

Man Ya good!! Wow!!

I allready REALLY REALLY REALLY look forwards to chapter 6-7-8-9-10 a.s.o..... (There'll be a lot more right?!)
person Moonbabe1989
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story :D I cant wait until you update it!! and I dont wanna seem pushy or anything, but you are going to update it right? its just that its a really good story and itd be a shame to see it left like it is
person cubbs
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahh i love it update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person purple shy
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update soon!!! i loveeeee this story and cant wait to see what happens next.
person dream
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!!!!! i love the story lots! i cant wait to see what happens next
person blak iris
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hopefully this isnt the last chapter?!!? well if it isnt then PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! please and thank you! :)
person Behind the Wheel
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You just have to continue. YOU canna leave me hanging like this. It ia very good story. Please update soon,
person twoforinu
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH SWEET AGONY! That's it? I seriously hope you're planning on adding more to this. Can't wait to see how things turn out. Hehe...I just love Kouga and Ayame pairings. *Nods* Update, por favor?
person nevaeh Azalea
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh i love this story!!!!!!!! u were acually RECOMENDED to me!!!! but yea this story rocks. i hope u can update soon! i'll be waiting..... but take ur time...
person Crumpled Petals
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely amazing. Not that I didn't already know that. I am amazed at your writing ability, I honestly and truely am. You're doing a terrific job for your first time fic posting up here on the web. Don't loose that fire you have, and keep writing to your heart's content. I'm positive this story will be amazing before you're fully done with it, even more than it is already. I love the humor, the smexyness of the character descriptions, and the absolute to die for Kouga Ookami! Oh gods... it's so great and so horrible how he's such an asshole in the beginning, but that you realize he isn't so bad after you get to know him. And Ayame... oh my god I love her! She's so stubborn, and strong willed, and I'm really really impressed.

All in all, I can't wait for the next installment. I'm seriously waiting on baited breath. So WRITE MORE!!! Eventually lol