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by YourouzokuAlpha

person Dana
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! i'm like...going to die from suspence! please review soon cause this story is AMAZING!
person moonbabe1989@yahoo.com
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay he loves her! and she loves him! Aww thats SO cute :-D im SO so so excited for the next chapter lol, extra excited ;-)
person Crumpled Petals
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Things are really heating up aren't they? Kinda makes me long to be able to update MY stories, but we'll have to talk about that later, huh? Anyway, I promised to make a comment and thus I'm doing it. First of all, I've already lavished over and over the great job you're doing. And you are. You are doing an exceptional job in Ayame's point of view, and at the same time keeping all the characters in their respective personalities. In other words, keeping the characters in character, lol. From the cocky smirking sexy Kouga, to the brash and loud and quick tempered Inuyasha, both of whom you know I love and adore, you're doing an amazing job. The only thing that bothers me is my own impatience. I know from experience how long it takes to get a chapter together, and that's just when you're writing it. That doesn't include the time it takes to get in the mood for one, or the time it takes to come up with the ideas you want the chapter and story to roll along with. The path you want your story to take. To be honest with you, I sincerely want to update Purple Petals the most, and a few other choice ones on Monday. Anyway, keep up the terrific work and I can't wait to see what happens next. Speaking off.... what WILL happen next? o.O Kouga and Ayame... together in the bed... naked... oh the possibilities. Just how good a boy will Kouga actually be? Can he survive the temptation? Oh, I can't wait to see.
person black iris
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHH i love it!!!!!! dramatic but sooo cute...
person Dana
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! your story is amazing! please please please keep writing because so often i come ocross really great stories that just really spark my interest but 98% of them are nver continued. Please continue writing like you do because i really like where this is going. Thanks. Please update!
person Jesse bee
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woot! i luv your story! kouga/ayame pairings rock :D too bad for ayame though, i dun think i could be with someone when i know they were like in love with someone else :(
person Bouken
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh my... I just can't get enough of this story!! You're such an inspiaration!

How do you get those words from? It's amazing... I once reviewed this story, but that was before I became author... But to read your story made me feel I should be one too...

ThanX! And keep up the good work... You have a fan in me^_____~
person moonbabe1989
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh so Inuyasha finally appears :D and he was Ayames friend a long time ago? well what the hell happened then? Aww poor Ayame too! Kougas such an ass :( well I loved the chapter! cant wait til the next!
person moonbabe1989
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated! and what a faaaantastic update too ;-) poor Ayame, I cant stand rapists! Im soo glad Kouga came to rescue her! I cant wait til the next chapter :DD
person gina
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kouga to the rescue?? i hope, i love this story!!!! thanks for sharing!!!=)