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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
if you don't want your story to be deleted then please add a disclaimer to your story something like I DON'Y OWN INUYASHA. Or they will delete your story trust me i know. i don't want the story to be deleted it is a great story. so please add the disclaimer as soon as you can.
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The "dance" : good idea ! When will he eat something correct ??? She changed a lot !! Interesting...
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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well done ! I foresee a long and difficult healing for the poor Sesshomaru...! Continue !!! (What means "spandex" ? (I'm french...))
Merely Truth
Merely Truth
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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your so so Mean Naughty Mistress, How could you be so diabolically cruel to the beautiful elegant Sexy Sessy, I know I could find so many worthwhile uses for him that didn't envolve bleeding. I think I like to interduce him to SJS for a little doggy style crossover M/M in Mexico...oh gosh... can you dig it Sugar Butt. LOL G
PS Your writing rocks!
PS Your writing rocks!
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June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
<3!!! Awesome story!! Sesshoumaru is wwaayyy OOC but i can see why. I love where you're going with this and i'm excited to read more. I hope though, that later on Sesshoumarus old self comes back some.. Maybe not all the way but just a little bit to take away some of his OOCness. ^.^ well update soon!!!!
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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I'm french and I decided to review your story to help you. Revenge is a good idea, truly, but I hope that she will give him a few gentleness. What is not very nice is that there is alot of horrible wounds and of blood, too much, and in the bed where they'll sleep just after (beurk !).
I find Sesshoumaru not very Sesshoumaru, even weakened and broken ! and I would like more thoughts of the characters described, how they decided their next actions. Don't you think that an explanation about the motive of the revenge will increase the clarity of the story ? and why did she change all the time of idea ? once sweet, once awful...! Poor boy ! I hope that she will begin to become nice with him, to help him, perhaps to find his dignity ? Aren't they other persons in the story ?
Thank you to continue, I'll read !
A bientôt,
Merely Truth
I find Sesshoumaru not very Sesshoumaru, even weakened and broken ! and I would like more thoughts of the characters described, how they decided their next actions. Don't you think that an explanation about the motive of the revenge will increase the clarity of the story ? and why did she change all the time of idea ? once sweet, once awful...! Poor boy ! I hope that she will begin to become nice with him, to help him, perhaps to find his dignity ? Aren't they other persons in the story ?
Thank you to continue, I'll read !
A bientôt,
Merely Truth
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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story I give it a 10/10. Please continue