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for My Brother's Keeper

by KogasAngel

person sysclp
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad to see you back and hope you get to update your other IY stories soon as well. Thanks!
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I really hope you continue with it. I know very well what it's like to live with friends/family who are part of a frat/sorority and you're not. It can be...interesting haha =] I really like the way the character relationships are developing and how the characters themselves are changing with each new encounter with Kagome and her roommates. The guys of YYH, IY, and FY would make the most scrum-diddly-umptions fraternity in the history of...ever and everything! I really hope to see something new soon. Keep up the great work!
--CI
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
any more?
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is interesting so far. youko seems to have a genuine interest in kagome but sessy doesnt, i wonder how she'll feel later on. i like the way you wrote about how everyone treated her differently when she lost weight and the fact that the reasons people can be heavy dont have to be because they eat alot or even the wrong kinds of food. both sides of my family have sever obesity problems and out of me and my two sisters only my youngest sister isnt overweight but she's borderline anorexic. it's amazing to see how people treat you differently when you're overweight and sad to say that if you're an overweight child people are mad at the parents but once you hit highschool it's all your fault. i had a single working mother who would buy us a doughnut on the way to the sitters at 5am and either buy fast food or make junk like hamburger helper for dinner, but what can you expect when she worked 12hrs a day. growing up we never had fresh vegies only canned peas, corn, and green beans. and it has been hard learning to like and eat different vegies and i still dont do a good job of eating them. kagome is lucky in your story, she has someone who cares enough about her to help her not only learn to eat right and exercise but also offer emotional and financial support, not to mention the fact she's only 60 pounds overweight. i wonder what the story would be like if she was like me and weighed around 300 pounds in high school and didnt have the money to go to college. something most people dont understand is it's very hard to exercise when you're overweight, if you dont belive me then try strapping 200 pounds of weights to your stomach and go through your normal day to see what it's like.
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well as the norm with all of your stories, I love this one. Kinda.... I'm not to gung-ho about Kagome snuggling up to Sesshomaru even though he was never nice to her in the past. Yes, I know you stated he never went out of his way to be mean to her either, it all just seems... I dunno sudden. But that's just me, i still like the story regardless and look forward to an update.
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You really need to up date this ..dam dam dam.. I wanna know more :)
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this story last night and was instantly hooked! It's fantastic; very entertaining! I can't wait for the next chapter ^_^
person Crysan
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep it coming I like the story line so far. Please update soon!!!
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh....so good. please continue!!!!
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi this is a really great fic do u plan on updating? i see u haven't in months