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for My Brother's Keeper

by KogasAngel

person Pamela
schedule December 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story is great! Do hope you finish it. I would love to see how the rivalry turns out. It seems like she has truly captivated both men.
schedule January 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! Waiting for more chapters! Pleeeeeeaaassseee! :D
schedule January 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story & thought it had a great deal of potential. I was quite sorry to see that the author seems to have just given up on the story.
person Boocat
schedule May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have really enjoyed the stories you have written, this one included. I hope you post more on this story soon.
person Anon
schedule November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE! The end of the chapter was definitely a cliff hanger lol. I would love to know what happens next :)
schedule July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg....PLEASE!!!!! YOU MUST DO MORE..........PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.....email me at valiente16@yahoo.com if you update....
person evilpinatag
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this is a great story! I just finished the chapters you have up so far. the idea of the weight loss was great and kind of sad. Update again soon!
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaay!!!

I saw the other day that you had updated one of your Inuyasha stories and I was even more ecstatic to see that it was this one! I'm so glad that you've gotten your mojo back for writing. I'm also very happy to hear that you'll still be working on your Naruto fics because I have to say that I'm quite addicted to those as well, lol.

Now for the newest chapter...

Even though Youko hasn't done anything wrong, I wish he had, because that would give me a reason to hate him. I know this is a Sesshoumaru x Kagome, but he's in the way! Lol! I'm still kinda leary as to if he's really going to hurt Kagome by cheating on her, or if their relationship just ends.

The kiss between Kagome and Sesshoumaru...it was so sweet even though it was in a public place. He didn't have to have a reason to do, he just did it and that totally did it for me.

There is tons of other things I could say, but I'll stop here.

I'll be eagerly awaiting the update for this...or any of your fics! :-D
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YIPPIE!!!!! *doing happy dance*

I have been waiting forever (it seems) for you to update this story! Don't get me wrong, I absolutely adore your other IY stories, but for some reason THIS ONE has held my attention since I began reading it a year or so ago.

I am very happy (incase you didn't notice earlier)that you have updated this story, and I am looking forward to your return to your IY stories, and seeing what you will create/write for us next!

Until we meet again ........ (soon I hope) *wink*
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. It's pretty over the top but in a good way! I like how Kagomehas transformed from an ugly duckling to a swam. I'm curious to see how her love interests will turn out. I figure that since this story is under Kagome/Sesshomaru that he'll be the victor, but you've caught my attention. I hope you continue this story! I look forward to more chapters. Good luck!