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for What the Darkness Brings

by IAgree

person Lori
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is pretty neat. I liked the last chapter in particular. Sesshoumaru torturing poor Inuyasha was a bit sad, but when his mother showed up things really got rolling. Sesshoumaru standing up to his mother (for whatever reason) for Inuyasha was nicely done and that last line about her being his worst enemy was great. I like your unique take on Sesshoumaru's personality, cruel, ruthless, but he still has his few redeeming characteristics. Um, have to admit I skipped the first chapter (mostly!) I have so little reading time I tend to skim but some of this is quite interesting.
person Ema
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, hey, this is really promising! Like the plot line and the narrative structure. I do not see the connection to the Greek myth, but yeah, mybe later ^.^' I'd definitely like to read more.
Schöne Grüße,
EMA
person Kanami
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed your story! Keep up the good work :)