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Please continue. I like the story.

I love this story... Please update soon!

I'm most deffinately pleased with the update :p
I understand you lead a busy life, I myself know exactly what it is,
I'm currently writing two fanfics on my own but have so little time
to work on them which actually saddens me cause I love writing. You
most likely feel about the same way otherwise you wouldn't be writing huh ;)

I hope your other fans understand and will continue to have faith in you, I for
one do and will continue to read this amazing story :) Keep up the good work.

Greetings, Kiara

I have long been keeping up on this story and yes... I like Nezumi as well and never really cared for Kikyo though I understand her anger. Bravo on the story and please update soon. Will you e-mail me when you get it updated? Thanks!!

Nice story, very nice story. I am looking forward to reading more of your own work.

*sighs*
I seriously want to read more of this. This is a beautifully done story, you hit everyone so well. Kagome injured is almost stronger then when whole, her possible schizo type of voices hearing is an enchanting idea that I want to hear more of. And i LOVE seeing someone else portraying Sesshomaru as the subtle bishie we all know and love.
That doesn't mean I don't want more scenes between them right away. But I realize that many things, good things, are worth the wait. Please update once more soon, I will be waiting and watching.

~WD

Please continue the story.

you are not a selfish bitch to want a good critique of your work. Having asked for a good critique shows that you are willing to learn from other and mistakes that they could show you, and a writer like that is something i look forward to. I personally love your idea of a line of demons who study medicine not merely to heal, but more for a great thirst for knowledge. I love your depiction of Sesshoumaru (I've been subjected to some horrible OOC sessh's, it can get really bad). I'm interested to see what you are going to do with the Shikon and Kagome since they seem to be connecting more each time they are mentioned, patiently waiting for chapter 11 and of course the rest.

Heya,

I'm absolutely loving this story. I've started reading quite a while ago and don't think I've ever left a review *blushes* shame on me. It's just that I'm so badly addicted that I move from one story to the next so quickly I simply forget to leave reviews *blushes again*

Anyway I love how you keep the characters in character, I know that's not easy to do and I admire you for being able to do so. I also enjoy the original ideas and the way you drag scenes out, even those that involve Naraku. You don't try to rush things but take it slowly, leaving as little as possible out. I very much enjoy that.

What saddens me however is the few updates, I understand you most likely have a life outside of all this and all. But it's always sad to love a story so much and have to wait so long for updates. I hope you'll be able to find the time and update more often, and at the very least finish this story (as that's always my greatest fear).

Please do keep up your work, you're doing a great job :)

Much love, Kiara

More please?