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for Rivals in love

by rinflowers1986

person Andi
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot.I've read the story before. I was browsing and chapter 1 was different. :D I Like it better. Gruesome fight scenes are awesome. Update the rest asap~
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dude yuo're writting is the shit! you super conveyed the characters emotions and the descriptions are awesome!!! dont ever stop writting!!!
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES Rin! I'll be glad when you get back. Miss ya much!
person szaugg
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just saying a few things:
1. I enjoy the hell out of this story and so was re-reading it again. I hope that someday just the right mood hits you to finish this. It's a sad thing that so many good Kouga fics don't get much attention just because they aren't Sessh/Inu. I thought this was fun and angsty and enjoy it a lot.
2. So sorry to hear about your loss. It is a curious combination to be able to laugh and enjoy aspects of our lives and deaths, even while each loss is still painful, but if I read the last A/N right, it seems that you andyour friends have found a way to do that, so I'm glad that the joy over things is still there mixed in with the sadness. Take care.
person ladytokyo aka shivonne
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awe sesshy cares. ok well I read all of this . please tell me that Inuyasha isn't going to end up with the wolf!
Kagome that's all she does is run away. they never get anywhere, she could have said that stuff to the wimp wolf rapist a long time ago. keh! and that collor so needs to go. I had that he's her slave inu. it's not right, she loves him but tries to change him to be what she deem ok. can anybody say kikyou! Him now why would Sesshomaru revive his little brother and what was he feeling? maybe he should take him away to stay and train with him hn. ok I'm not going to keep ranting so whenever plz update sometime we all miss you. *!* (^_^)

ladytokyo
person mamarita
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story- so, Sesshomaru saved his little brother. Interesting.. Sorry to hear about your friend's passing, but hopefully, you will all recover soon. If this story is to be continued, I look forward to any updates. Peace and love to you all!
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this story I have to know the end!!
person Anon
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hope you update this soon. the story and emotions were well done. so far neither is alpha. i want to see how you work through it.
person jade
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gahhhh i need more of this story.. gahhhhh.
person jacob
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dammit update iv been waiting 4 months ahhhhhhh dammit do it