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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi, i really like this story. can you edit and update at the same time? please i want new chapters.
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March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the intensity is so much higher in this incarnation of your story. i do hope you continue in this vein for the remaining chapters, and the conclusion of this story.
i am so glad that you decided to come back to this story.
the only thing to watch is homonyms. there/their, new/knew, then/than.
thank you so much for this new beginning
i am so glad that you decided to come back to this story.
the only thing to watch is homonyms. there/their, new/knew, then/than.
thank you so much for this new beginning
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, update asap...Need to know what happens next!!
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loves it!!!! loves it loves it loves it! ^^
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm new to your story, so am unbiased to it and wanted to inform you that i liked your edited chapters. i'll keep watch for new additions.
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! *Is freaking out* I really want to see what happens... I think Sesshy should be in it more ^_^ lol just my opinion. Kagome o_o... I never liked her. I always thought Inu should end up with Kouga :D. I cant wait to see what happens!!!
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think that chapter 9 couldn't really be better. Please don't do too much to it. As for the others, I think the rape scene is pretty graphic right now. It left nothing to the imagination. I like the reworked 1st 2 chapters, but don't think too much more is needed past that. Just my opinion... Thanks Rin for a great story. DLS
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like Rivals in love.. i started reading them though at like 4 am my time... finished at like 6 just cause i took a break to each somehting.... but none the less it held my attention... i do hope you will continue this story...
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YEA!!!! WOOOOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! YOUR BACK!!!! I AM SOOOOOOO HAPPY!!!!
You by far are one of thee best Kouga/Inu writers I have ever had the pleasure to read!!!! I am thrilled to see you back and better then before if that is even possible! You cleaned the first two chapters beautifully not that they really needed all that much.
I look forward to seeing any and all of your revisions to this story! I hope and pray that you will continue your other storys as well if you can. I'm not trying to rush you at all! From what your friend wrote you seemed like you needed time away to maybe get things in life taken care of I hope all is well with you and I truly look forward to re-reading a lot of your storys. THANK YOU FOR COMING BACK!!!
You by far are one of thee best Kouga/Inu writers I have ever had the pleasure to read!!!! I am thrilled to see you back and better then before if that is even possible! You cleaned the first two chapters beautifully not that they really needed all that much.
I look forward to seeing any and all of your revisions to this story! I hope and pray that you will continue your other storys as well if you can. I'm not trying to rush you at all! From what your friend wrote you seemed like you needed time away to maybe get things in life taken care of I hope all is well with you and I truly look forward to re-reading a lot of your storys. THANK YOU FOR COMING BACK!!!
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There are still some spelling errors but other than that I think the rewrite is definitely good. I like this story and am glad to see it getting written and made better. ^_^
Keep up the good job. looking forward to further updates.
sincerely,
jazzy
Keep up the good job. looking forward to further updates.
sincerely,
jazzy