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by rinflowers1986

schedule December 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

MORE PLEASE!!!!! 

I love it! From Koga (reluctantly) caring for Inuyasha to when he took human Inuyasha I love it! And Sesshy showing up to avenge his brother's rape & revive him was awesome. I also like Inuyasha's dream of Koga after it happened. Please don't leave is hanging loke this!!!

Kagome needs to sit down somewhere after she abandoned Inuyasha. He belongs to Koga now!

person Zena McClain
schedule May 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Make it were Kagome and the others see Kouga kiss Inuyasha and he kiss Kouga back. Kagome runs to the well and sits looking down, Sesshomaru smalls her tires. To put out there can you make it were, Sesshomaru sees kagome saying "No one loves me, why can't anyone love me." Sesshomaru answers "Miko, I don't understand what feelings are, but I do feel something that makes this Sesshomaru want to be near you." You can use this and add more, change it around some. :)
person loveless
schedule June 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just update n tell me when u do
person Starshima
schedule September 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOW WHAT A STORY!!!! INU&KOGA 4EVVRERRR PLEASE PUT UP THE NEXT CHAPPIEE!!
schedule August 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
eeeeek!!! you cant leave off there!!!! i wanna know what happens next?!? andddd i havent read the original first couple chapters but i like the revised stuff more then the original other later chapters (
person nuri
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"If you were expecting a new chapter, sucks to be you." Wow....way to be extremely rude to your readers. Despite that, if you do ever finish the story I'd still like to give it a chance.
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Like'n it so far! I'll be waiten until your all ready to post the enxt chap!
person ad
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GREAT story--I hope you keep writing it!!!!

I REALLY like what you did with the revisions! I remember reading this story before it was revised and it was good but now its evne better!
person rainy_days
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I'm glad you're back!! ^^
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Like it! the new chapters are delicious! Looking forward to the rest of the repost. ^_^