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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I feel that this story is a really great find here on aff.net. The writing is really very well done and the story is quite interesting and is developing nicely. I hope that you continue to work on this story. I know I'll be checking back for updates. :)
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June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I can't keep my mouth from reopening in awe and wonder toward the light and delicate style of your writing! It's like I've gone to a book store and just picked up a new best seller hot of the press on to the selves. Your writing draws in its readers with detailed surroundings and realistic reations. Amazing work on adjetives!
I've read each one of your posted stories and have yet to be dissatisfied with your handy work. Specially since its in a whole new light of creativity with story plots that keep one guessing and interested.
I begg you, I implore you, to please continue your writing! If not in this site, then in a journal or something. I'd hate to see such talent go to waste.
What a blessing God has given you!
I'm going to write this same review in each of your stories in hopes that you'll get an award if I may be so bold to hope for you.
I've read each one of your posted stories and have yet to be dissatisfied with your handy work. Specially since its in a whole new light of creativity with story plots that keep one guessing and interested.
I begg you, I implore you, to please continue your writing! If not in this site, then in a journal or something. I'd hate to see such talent go to waste.
What a blessing God has given you!
I'm going to write this same review in each of your stories in hopes that you'll get an award if I may be so bold to hope for you.