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for Indentured Survitude

by rinflowers1986

person SkatCat
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Short but good! I'm really looking forward to some Kagura and Sesshomaru will finally really meet. I can't wait to find out what happens next! Great work, Can't wait until the next chap! ^_^
person LyricalBeautyxx
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am truly in love with this story. I love how you write you are so talented!!!!!! I hope you make it into a love triangle It would be most interesting indeed. Sesshoumaru is so sexy here *sigh* and Inuyasha too. Poor Kagura im sure she will clean up very nicely.
person tabatha
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it so far; update soon.
person WTW
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do hope that you don't feel rushed by anyone in completing any of your stories. Please take as much time as needed so that you'll enjoy the writing with out being pushed for a quick finish. Keep up the super outstanding job!
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WOW! I can't keep my mouth from reopening in awe and wonder toward the light and delicate style of your writing! It's like I've gone to a book store and just picked up a new best seller hot of the press on to the selves. Your writing draws in its readers with detailed surroundings and realistic reations. Amazing work on adjetives!

I've read each one of your posted stories and have yet to be dissatisfied with your handy work. Specially since its in a whole new light of creativity with story plots that keep one guessing and interested.

I begg you, I implore you, to please continue your writing! If not in this site, then in a journal or something. I'd hate to see such talent go to waste.
What a blessing God has given you!

I'm going to write this same review in each of your stories in hopes that you'll get an award if I may be so bold to hope for you.
person Evelyn
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this fanfiction. It's so unique. I wish for you to keep on going its the best one I've read so far on Sess/Kagu. Keep up the good work! I really enjoy reading this!!!!!