rate_review Reviews

It's to bad you abandoned this. It looks like it could have been a nice story. Although I think you aren't ready to write anything sexual. Everything you wrote was well thought out, nice details, and showed real planning. But the whole Sango strattling him part and whatnot....that was a rushed and didn't make very much sense. I'm sure if you read it now you would see what I mean. Oh well another good thing lost amoung the spam....


Let me know if you start this again. I don't think I'll be checking back because there is no hope you are continuing.

tis story holds a promise i would like to
see what happens next

hi, this seems like a really gr8 start to the story! i can't wait til miroku grows up! hope you update soon!

What a greusome start to a story but an important one! You have a realy cool writting style and I am curios to read what happens! Keep up the good work!