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for Chaotic Complications

by ForbiddenRyu

schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gawds chapter 3 really does it for me every freaking time I read it. I adore what you do in this collection and LOL every time Keiko runs in the room and 'acts' it really kills me.
person Coffee Gyrl
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww I love seeing someone pair Hiei with the ladies instead of the fellas. Thanks for the new addition.
person coocoo
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cute. liked the yukina/kagome/hiei one. I think the authoress adorkablebanana set the xover yuri trend here and i'm perky she did. nice one, the added het is hot.
person Kimisan
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter four was very good. I enjoyed it immensely.Love to see Hiei take control and Botan brought it upon herself. Keep up the good work, *Hands you Aoshi cookies*
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person KirbeeJenkins
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Your story is great, Love the Hiei/Keiko/Yusuke chapter the most! Hope u got some more chapters coming out
person Kogas Hentai Luver (not logged in)
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I usually do not read het fics, but since there are so few Yusuke/Keiko lemons out there, I couldn't help but to read this 3some. I am so glad I did. It was hot and sexy and wonderfully written. I always knew that Keiko wasn't so innocent, lol. I loved the premise of Keiko giving Yusuke his fantasy for a birthday present. Also, Hiei was kept in complete character, not an easy task. They all were kept in character, given the circumstances. What a naughty 3some. Unfortunately, I'm not interested in any YuYu het pairings unless it includes Yusuke, so I'll be checking for future chapters with Yusuke in it, K. ^_^ I love MY Yusuke. I'm totally obsessed with him, lol.
person Goku
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh man, Hiei is a little SLUT in all of these! LOL!
nice threesomes!
person SpikedStar
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.............You are a lemon writing GOD!! Hurry up and get another one out soon! and on the plus side, i loved the couple too! Good work!
person SpikedStar
schedule June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yea! I really like this story, lots of detail and excitement. Are all the pairings gonna be Hiei/Kagome and someone else? If so, you should definantly throw Botan in the mix next time. Keep up the great work!