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January 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This really was a great one shot, it moved me to tears. thank you for writing it!
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July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I would love it if you could continue this son=mehow. It would be interesting to see how Heiei turns out after being raised by Kagome. And to see how Koenma would react. I don't know if it's possible bit if it is would you consider contiuing it?
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was good, i would like more. does koenma send kurama or one of the others to correct things or does time actually change. if it changes then what happens.
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOO! UPDATE SOON PWEEZ~
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Surely there is more to the story. Like how Kagome found Hiei and what happens to the two groups.
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
h wow! Are you going to continue this because it was awesome! Good one shot too but now you have me on a fix!
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww this is such a cute story i really like it, and i wish that u wud continue it
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June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is another request for you to continue. This story has alot of potential. I hope you continue and will look forward to see how you develop the story line.
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June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
After months of having aff.net down, I come back to find this fabulous and thoroughly original story which incorporates two of my all time favorite animes. And I must say that I want more, much more. So please update as soon as possible. Ja ne.
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June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You killed him!? Noooo...
I like it so far but hey if you change Hiei to a simpering fool he'll lose the only thing I like about him: his unyielding personality. He's a complex character, cold, hard, powerful and deep down a good guy but he had to go through a lot of shit to get where he is now. So, what you gonna do with him?
Anyway good start just dont make a doormat out of him.^_^
I like it so far but hey if you change Hiei to a simpering fool he'll lose the only thing I like about him: his unyielding personality. He's a complex character, cold, hard, powerful and deep down a good guy but he had to go through a lot of shit to get where he is now. So, what you gonna do with him?
Anyway good start just dont make a doormat out of him.^_^