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for Naraku's Dildo Dreams: Cosas Random

by MaroKuiitu

person SlothSlogan
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore you. I do. o_o Your crazy story gives me fits of giggles and now I have a silly grin on my face.

Thanks alot.

You bagel.
person Kursk
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Welcome to my world

Involve yourself within my dream

Experience a life

Just like your mind thought not to be

Take a look through time

At past or present worlds to be

I rule this inferno

Enthroned for eternity



- Slayer, Spirit in Black



Coils of the serpent unwind

Buried beneath you will find

Deep in the halls of the damned

Spirit in black 'til the end



Spirits damned to rot

Amidst the brimstone fireballs

Eyes of the dead

Watching from their living walls

Broken glass reflections

Show your flesh eaten away

Beyond the gates I'll take you

Where the blood forever rains



Coils of the serpent unwind

Buried beneath you will find

Deep in the halls of the damned

Spirit in black 'til the end



Afterlife confessions

Tell me who you used to be

Looking on in wonder

As I show you it was me

Burning from within

You know one spark is all it takes

Hear the piercing cries of all

Who found that Hell awaits



Living nightmare, can't you see?

You really have no choice

Faded memories haunt you

Listen closely to my voice

Feed me all your hatred

Empty all your thoughts to me

I can fill your emptiness

With immortality!



Welcome to my world

Involve yourself within my dream

Experience a life

Just like your mind thought not to be

Take a look through time

At past or present worlds to be

I rule this inferno

Enthroned for eternity!

person uNd3|2/\g3d p3rs0n
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dun u lik da wai i tak?

i has good ingrish.


:: Rolls eyes ::

Because my finger hit the 't' twice on accident doesn't mean anything.

You fucking Anon.

I had a few Anon's spamming on of my storys review thing too. About 50 reviews of 'Anon' saying useless shit.
person >_>
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
One, not on.... piece of shit keyboard....
person Anon
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To Underage -- litterate is spelled wrong. I think you ruined the point you were trying to make.
person Underaged person
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
>_> Are underaged people that bad?

Some are more litterate than half of the writers here.

Not saying I know any underaged people here................
person Anon
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are an underaged troll and will be reported as such.
person Kursk
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fear not, good citizens, for any IQ loss incurred here will be minimal and temporary.
person masked revenger
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The sad part is, that night have been the most coherent chapter, though it was too long.
person Anon
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* unfortunately, the best part of this story is the reviews. Take a hint.