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June 28, 2020 at 12:00 AM
when will this be going on its a killer to start to read some thing an never have it finished XD
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March 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
love your story keep going i cant wat for the next
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November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is great!
awesome story so far, though it might benefit you to find a beta reader!
congrats on a fantastic story line!
awesome story so far, though it might benefit you to find a beta reader!
congrats on a fantastic story line!
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August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story :) Finally something kind of different. Please update soon ^_^
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July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is pretty interesting! I can't wait to see more of it!! ^_^ Though, I'm curious if Kikyo will really go ahead and give the collar to Kagome? o.O
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July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry but it what world do you live that 3 year olds talk like they are 12, and have the physical coordination skills to do the things they do? It would be nice if you rewrote the dialouges or at least bumped up their ages so it makes sense!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very well writte so far. But with your last chapter upload, the file seems to have gotten messed up and your parenthesis for all the speaking parts is askew. It makes it difficult to read, but a good chapter nonetheless.
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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am absoluely in love with this story! I love this new Kagome and inuyassha and just it's a great story I pray for the next chapter soon!!!
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July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow its really good a friend of mine jackie told me to read it. i can see you havent continued it in a long time and i really hope you do. thanks
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January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
continue totally loving it