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June 20, 2019 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED this story; it was AMAZING!!
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June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my, woow.
this is such a heartbreaking story.
It is very heartfelt, and shows how Sesshu and Rin really connect. And shows how he can't leave her,
and admits his feelings.
You are a great writer and i hope you can wite many more. i look forward to reading them.
this is such a heartbreaking story.
It is very heartfelt, and shows how Sesshu and Rin really connect. And shows how he can't leave her,
and admits his feelings.
You are a great writer and i hope you can wite many more. i look forward to reading them.
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like, its very deep
i hope you dont stop writing your stories
can you keep me updated if you write more cause i read most of yours but i like this one the best *so far*
i hope you dont stop writing your stories
can you keep me updated if you write more cause i read most of yours but i like this one the best *so far*
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ameril 2007-09-02 id # 3000059670
You know, I really loved this story. It was really fulfilling, it carried out nicely to the end. I liked the dove demon what whas her name again? Azaaki? I could picture how pretty she was but honestly, the moment I read she was coming to the western lands I immediately despised her and wanted for her to die- to keel over and look what happened, Rin poisoned her! At the time I was laughing maniacally when she dropped down, I mean I like her but then she was going to take Sesshomaru away from Rin, and that majorly pissed me off. But anyway about this beautiful story... it was nicely detailed (which I liked) and worded, so I didn't lose interest after reading the first two paragraphs. I liked this kind of story theme and I encourage more like this! Great job overall!! Keep up the good work! *Grins*
-Ameril
You know, I really loved this story. It was really fulfilling, it carried out nicely to the end. I liked the dove demon what whas her name again? Azaaki? I could picture how pretty she was but honestly, the moment I read she was coming to the western lands I immediately despised her and wanted for her to die- to keel over and look what happened, Rin poisoned her! At the time I was laughing maniacally when she dropped down, I mean I like her but then she was going to take Sesshomaru away from Rin, and that majorly pissed me off. But anyway about this beautiful story... it was nicely detailed (which I liked) and worded, so I didn't lose interest after reading the first two paragraphs. I liked this kind of story theme and I encourage more like this! Great job overall!! Keep up the good work! *Grins*
-Ameril
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story of the tension of their desires. Sesshomarus conflict of his emotions and Rin's love that to me is pure, all of these elements you've added made this story absolutely one of me favorites. I am grateful for a writer like you.
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. I've never read a fic about rin murdering anyone before. And Sesshoumaru has an interesting personality in this fic.
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What? Did you read the story, or look through it?
: in response to NateDog :
: in response to NateDog :
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are you trying to say the girl is a whore?
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why wasn't Azakii just revived by the sword? She could have just been let go after she was brought back to life.
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I find myself liking and not liking this story for some reason. I love the story behind it, and I love the POV and the short sentences, but I feel like something is missing that would make this a really good fic. I feel some of the dialogue is a bit strained in the situation, and the plot seems to move from a hot love scene to a marriage to another to quickly.
I think with some fleshing out and maybe a good beta, this would be a fantastic fic. There is great potential here, keep up the writing!
I think with some fleshing out and maybe a good beta, this would be a fantastic fic. There is great potential here, keep up the writing!