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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm having way too much fun with little tale of your's
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nicely done! oh continue sil vous plais!!!!
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
and thanks for clearing all that up for me. I'm not confused anymore.
^_^
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have to continue this. Excellent story; I just love it. lol
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15. Keep going with this story, it is going well. Still cannot wait for those two to meet up.
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SO, I started reading this out of complete and utter boredom with nothing else to do.
at first i was confused as ALL hell, and a tad bit uninterested, but actually, this story has peeked some interest in my mind and i find myself enthralled. Only thing is that there are a few things i think i might need clarifyed if you could be so kind as to make an A/N at the top of your next chapter about them... that would begreat.
1. In what way is kagome related to the other kagome other than reincarnates? This whole thing just gets really confusing...
2. Did Inuyasha travel through the well or did he live into the future? If he traveled through, what I don't understand is how there is another Higurashi Kagome whose family owns that shrine at the same TIME that HIS kagome's family did.
such confusions... I hope I can get these cleared, it might help my reading a little bit more....
I look forward to updates.
at first i was confused as ALL hell, and a tad bit uninterested, but actually, this story has peeked some interest in my mind and i find myself enthralled. Only thing is that there are a few things i think i might need clarifyed if you could be so kind as to make an A/N at the top of your next chapter about them... that would begreat.
1. In what way is kagome related to the other kagome other than reincarnates? This whole thing just gets really confusing...
2. Did Inuyasha travel through the well or did he live into the future? If he traveled through, what I don't understand is how there is another Higurashi Kagome whose family owns that shrine at the same TIME that HIS kagome's family did.
such confusions... I hope I can get these cleared, it might help my reading a little bit more....
I look forward to updates.
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah, and I forgot to mention that you should probably go through this again. I noticed that you have some wrong usage of words that should be fixed... IE... here instead of hear.... just as an example of one.
NICE Lemon. ^_^
NICE Lemon. ^_^
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More Please! So far it's kept me on the edge of my seat. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you updating over here. I don't have time to give a real review, but I will say that this is an excellent story and well written. You keep me hooked with Inuyasha's attempt to find Kagome and with the prospect that the play might hold some significance. Kouga is just a plain out bastard in this fic. I feel sorry for him for being written that way. LOL Well, I hope that you get all of your chapters up soon!
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Update!! Your story is very well written. Very Discriptive and makes you feel like you are there!! Can't wait for the next update!!