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Chapter 36 -- Her "Dog Prince" That was cute. Knew they were going to "escape" from the house. Wonder where they are going?

I really enjoy your story. keep up the good work and I am so excited that they have finally got to meet again. this is definently a love to cherish*sigh*

woo hoo, an update! I like Michael's continuing skepticism, it seems in character, even if I keep getting annoyed at him, personally, for being wrong, heh. Love Selene's excitement over them, and Inuyasha is, as usual, lovely and in character and 'kiss my ass if you don't like i' hope you update soon again!!

Ooooh, I was hoping there'd be another one today! Awesome, very intriguing the way Houjo and Kouga are shaping up, and the changes in Miranda are interesing as well. She's losing sympathy and becoming a less sympathetic character to me the last couple of chapters. Heh, beheading Michael. Nice cop intro thing, and I'm looking forward to seeing how that plays out, and still very curious about Shippou and Sessh and Inu meeting! Can hardly wait for the next chapter!

That last chapter was awesome! I wished I was Kagome when she found out it was InuYasha. :3

awwe I loved that reveal... you need to put up more chappies asap.

I'm enthralled.

Chapter 33 -- I loved it. I was laughing at the end of this chapter. Real;ly glad she found out. It was really sweet!

OMG OMG OMG OMG, Where's chapter 33?? I need chapter 33, c'mon it's so not fair, you're so evil to leave a cliffie like that!! Pleeeeasse, I'm begging you. . .please please please post chapter 33!!

*sniffles* Thank You! ummmm patience isn't exactly my strong point, but i guessed you noticed that, huh? sorry. . .but Thank You!

The best ever!!!! That was an awesome three chapters. The writing was great, the pacing and flow was great, and there were lots of great lines mixed in as well, as well as the angst of Kouga and Miranda. Aaaah, what to do about those 2? eeek. the motorcycle was great, and inuyasha showing up at their house was awesome. Hojo was a surprise, and i"m interested in seeing what he'll turn out to be like. Very sweet how Sango and Miroku are remembering each other and his death. Awww.
and the mark, yea, even more hope for the happy ending.

Lines I really liked:
“Feh. . . Blech. . . mmm. . . ugh. . . ah. . . OH NO. . .” Kagome commented shaking her head.
“I see. . . so, you're saying. . . I stink?” she teased.
“mmhmm, just like a flower does. . .”
“You're gonna run your ass crosswise with the law...
Fire rat red
“Damn!! Don't you guys ever actually eat?? You pulled this last night, too. . .” grumbled the surfer as he reached for his board. “A guy could starve to death. . .
What the hell is it now, Jackass?”
“She just got home. . . DAMN!! I can hear her goin' on behind you, is this your call or hers?? . . . Tell the witch YES, I am behavin'. . . Her precious Mike is right here, OK?”
“Do you guys mind??” InuYasha growled, as he shut the door in their faces with a kick. “They haven't changed much, have they?”


man, I love this story. Can't wait for more, greedy as usual.