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for Finding Kagome

by MetsukiKaraTen

person szaugglaughs
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yea! Okay, that was cool. Nice fight scene. I thought you did a good job on going from detailed moments to more general description and back to details on that one. and I'm enjoying the ever more tangled relationships between everyone. All the teachers, etc... This is just a blast. Looking forward to another great chapter next time!
person Lady Laran
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have been following this with a lot of interest and am so pleased to see that Michael/Miroku has stopped being such an ass. Great job with this story so far!!
person InuYoukai
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 40 -- Knew the fight was going to happen. What a battle. Suprised by the outcome. Hope the change is not for forever.
person szaugglaughs
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man, I always liked ginta :-) I can hardly wait...Inuyasha and Michael throw down. Let the ass kicking commence! I thought the total misunderstanding between Kagome's view of what was going on vs. Inuyasha's view was nicely done, very in character based on their cultures and expectations. Again...next chapter, awaiting with bated breath. Oh...and the scene where Inuyasha held her down...very descriptively smooth and easy to see, and kinda hot, too.
person Anon
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
gahhhh put up fourty put up fourty!
person daemon pyreblue
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must say that Kagura the wind sorceress cooing to a little puppy is just about one of the funniest things I could imagin, that and said puppy wetting itself on Sess's pristine rug

This story is awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next.
thanks for a great story,
Daemon Pyreblue
person szaugglaughs
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah! Interesting twists and turns with the reporters and all. goodness, it just keeps getting more and more tense and exciting. Awww, I'm all happy for sessh and Kagura. Interesting how Miroku is the most clueless, especially as his original incarnation was always so smooth and mr. know it all. Kind of interesting to see how it's playing out. again, looking so forward to the next chapter. hope to enjoy it soon!
person XxSangoxX *not signed in*
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes...please do the sequel..
that would make me smile.
person InuYoukai
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 37 -- Another great chapter. Loved it.
person szaugglaughs
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aaaww, so sad. nice building of tension though. I'm dying to find out what happens next! and thanks for the humongous updating fests. love those!