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for So Beautiful

by jessicashae2005

person Marieka
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chap 18 *snickers and shakes her head* at least Kagome is trying *snickers* "indeed" *listens to crickets*

chap 19 *blinks* WoW I think he actually cheered her up ... and aaaaaaaws weather he is obligated to take care of her or not ... he will be ther for her. Somehow I think he actually wants to be there for her at this point.

*Does the dance o' joy and huggles you* Thank you for sharing. I Cant wait to read S'more! *slips you some strawberry Pocky*

Cool pic BTW
person insanewiz
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE UR STORY!!!!! and i agree with Kagome, Fluffy is kind of being a jerk...oh well... he's still hot, that and that's the way he is.
person jen
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love the story but ....... the chapters are short and i like them to be a little more biger but hey its your story and a good one at the i tip my hat for you it was a good read and still is only on 11 be geting there and if the story is not finshed that plese update (sobs) if i have to wait for the ending i will die in side !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person jen
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person lucy the lion
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was good.
If u don't mind can u make the cahpters a little longer?
That would b very nice.
And thank u 4 updating quickly.
=)
person Inu_Twins
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it!!! I hope U update soon!! Poor sesshy! I hope he learns his lesson!!
person Marieka
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL I have often wondered if those Inu brothers were not somehow related to mules they are so stuborn LOL

*huggles* Thanks for sharing. I look forward to reading S'more.

*Slips you some of her limited supply of Pocky.* "Its not a bribe or anything"
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person AIdeen
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love his story, but why is Kagome so worried?! Shessy should be able to do what he wants! Don't get me worng i love them as a couple but he should be a little angry at her!!! Love the story though!!
person person with a big smile
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ummmmmmmm...
not your best chapter.