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for So Beautiful

by jessicashae2005

person lolarennt
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
um, i'don't mean to be nit-picky(its just the way i am), but Usagi is the Japanese word for rabbit. Tsuki is moon.
The rest of the story is great though
person chaos
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I bet you will do wonderfullynow update soon lol :P
person Jess
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there-

for one, i really like your story!!! and to who ever says it sucks, just blow them off. I'm really curious as to how the story ends so email me when it's updates okay? I really like it!

ciao
person pInK pERsON
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WHAT THE HELL IS TAKING SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LONG!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This would be a nice fic if one didn't have to continuously re-read in order to figure out where a sentence begins and where it ends. You desperately need a beta. I might be inclined to read it in its entirety should your punctuation be corrected.
person darkside the fallen angel
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you can do it and if you need just your reads how they would like a lemon to be.*nods*
person Sankontesou
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story...update again soon!!
person Omega
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
C'mon! Hurry up. I wanna know the ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person The Lecturess
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is it too much to hope for a lemon?
person Minute Maid
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for making a long chapter.
But you need to hurry up!!!!!
I think I can speak for all your readers when I say " if we knew it was ganna take this long to
make a long chapter we would have never asked"
This better be supper long!
Just go back to the way things were!

plz & thank u!!!
(P.S. keep up the good work)