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for So Beautiful

by jessicashae2005

person h to the iso
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
usagi means bunny
person Kita Tsuki
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so sweet! I can't wait for the sequel! Peace.
person Kelly Martelle
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why r your chapters so short???????????????????????????????????????????????????????? If you wrote more your story would be better. Now you know that
person Stephena
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Girl you really need to make the 2nd one and if u would i could really help u with your lemons is you like to read my stories here are the links. I have 2 of them. Here is A New Beginning link... http://www.a-single-spark.com/fanficread.php?fid=4990&cid=1. Here is Unkown Love link... http://www.a-single-spark.com/fanficread.php?fid=4968&cid=1. Please read my stories and e-mail me at Killer_Black_Rose_001@yahoo.com. I loved your story even though the chapteres were short and the staory was shor. All in all it was a very good story.
person Kina
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, no affence to u as a writer but Sesshoumaru's Tensaiga is a sword of Healing so it not only brings people back from the dead but it heals their injuries.
person Ej lover!
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!
That was really good!
person Metis
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ouch, she's cruel and he's OOC. heh
person Metis
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
She babbles too much anyway.
person Metis
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad it's no longer on hold. I hope this doesn't set back their progress. They're both so stubborn. ^_^
person angelharlock
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was a nice lemon, I was really sad for sesshy at the end :( Please update soon, I love this story.