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for So Beautiful

by jessicashae2005

schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, keep up the good work.

Laura :)
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh please update...its a good story and i am really into it....
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like this story!

It's very well written.
person HanaTama
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Please update soon! xD I wanna know what happens next please! =D
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww how cute
this is my favorite story
plzz update soon
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i doubt that boiling milkweed will cause a woman to lactate but hey, it's fiction!

regular kittens and puppies are born with tiny needle sharp teeth... i foresee painfully sore raw nipples for the poor girl who's never had anything harsher than a bra rubbing against them. she's gonna need something for that!

kaili is a sneaky old woman, isn't he going to notice the difference in scent?

keep up the good work!
ginny

person patty15
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like this version of the story. please don't have any suicides this time. and if you do any chance they turn out to be failed attempts.
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
is she still insecure about her scars? will he tell her how he views her scars? will they find out where the baby came from? are they going to his grandmother or to keade for feeding help for the baby? does he know where and when kagome is from? is she still able to go home? would she be able to take the baby? will she be staying with him or will she move in with one of the old women or moving on her own? since they are obviously feeling the same things for eachother, kagome just told him she loved him, does he think she is serious or just being sarcastic?

best wishes for your muse! you don't have to personally answer these questions, you can answer them in your wonderful story.

thank you,
ginny
person Qiana
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow aww so Does he care?
person Crysan
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay a new chappie! cant wait for more to come up!