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for So Beautiful

by jessicashae2005

person corri
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
can we say disgruntled male come on sing it with me. great chappie
person corri
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
now that was major harsh. i will never be able to see alice in wonderland with the same eyes again. although come to think of it that cat always disturbed me on so very many levels. luv the chappie
person corri
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
luved everything you have written so far:) luv quotes they were interesting especially the sylvia plath and bette midler ones. will look forward to your next posting
person Yurychan
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what a heart-breaking story...really great, I enjoy each chapter more. though I would like them to be a bit longer, please? ^_^ great work, keep going!
person i swear i didn\'t do it, i was one the moon, with...uhm...Rikku! yeah!
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it, but you need a few more periods. There's alot of run on sentances in it, so that's kind of confusing. i end up having to put them in myself. other than that, i really love this story. Sesshy isn't completely enraptured with her at first sight, which is amazingly rare.
person QueenRuby
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. And the chishier(SP) cat was too cool. Keep it up.
person inifite silence
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really like your story and i appologize for whomever has cussed you out. in all honesty I just don't read the reviews that i get when i write. which you'll find out isn't under this name. i hope that every thing is going well with your story and i hope that you do update soon
person Jazzy
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is REALLY GOOD. I hope you add more, it is becoming more interesting with each chapter. Add more Please!!
person Kai
schedule June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really awesome, please keep going on it.
person labelle
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep up the good work i can't waite untill all the fluffy stuff happens