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for So Beautiful

by jessicashae2005

person mangadreams
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
luv the chapter
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heh... all alone in a dark cave with Sesshoumaru... sounds fun! :D Can't wait to find out what happens! :D
person ash
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you think you could make your chapters longer, its a good story but the chapters are short
person SilkenOrgasm *not signed in*
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Up date please....I want to read more!!

<3 thank you

Sel~
person fire_eyez
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i wish you could write longer chapters..but i understand u have a life:-D. i really like this story and will wait for u to update! dont listen to cruel words. If anything just take it constructively and if its truly rude then they can just rott. mean words arent needed to get a point across. anyway great story and im looking forward to more.
person Anon
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue i wonder what would happen to them
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heh... he doesn't love her YET! lol He'll get sucked in eventually... I mean, who doesn't love Kagome right? Great chapter! I really enjoyed it! :D
person corri
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
luv the start of this story:)
person corri
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sad but good and the bit with jumping like he =was scalded so funny
person corri
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter you balance the angst of the situation so well with humor makes it really pleasure to read

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