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Oooh... you shoud do more yaoi. Very nice work!

oh write more to this story! does kouga realize that they were seen? do kouga and miroku every figure out what to do?

For some reason I can see this actually happening...Everyone seems to be in character and everything is so realistic(which was very funny). I love that fact that you made Miroku wince in pain when Kouga was about to have sex with him. Usually people would write that Miroku would enjoy the feeling, but if someone stuck a dick up their ass I don't think they'll be crying out in pleasure. Anyway I enjoyed the fic and hope you continue writing great fics like this forever.

Wow... that was awsome! I've never throught of thoses two as a pair but danm if they wern't sexy! If you're possibly thinking of doing another chapter or two I can't wait! If not, this was still an awsome fic, very intresting pairing... Anyaway, great work!

Wow! Nice story! ^_^ I love the pairing! I love the story too! Esp the last part. Lolz~

That was great! your style is so natural, really seems like things the characters would do most of the time. And I dont think you need such a strong warning on a site like this, especialy in this catagory, yaoi is great, and if some poor confused person stumbles into this section its their fault. Anywho, great work. I couldnt tell if this was meant to be a oneshot or not but i definately wouldn't complain about more of it! Love the story, and good luck in your future writing.

Happy reading, writing, and reviewing to you,
Immortality lost

PS: I feel so cheap doing this, but if you get a chance i'd really apreciate it if you'd read my story Artificial love and give me some feedback. What can i say, i'm a whore for reviews. No pressure. See ya!

I love it! Please update soon.