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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter. Poor Fluffy! Right whaen he found Inu, Inu's gona die! Thats so sad, please don't kill Inu!
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Each chapter of this storyline has been well crafted and holds a readers attention to the last word. It will be interesting to see if you end it in tears or laughter. I am looking forward towards the next chapter or two.
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story its so good! I hope Inuyasha stays alive in the story! Update soon!
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh god! Oh god! Oh gooooooddddddd!!! (sob) I can't... review right now! I'm too emotional! This is horrible! (not horrible-writing, horrible-situation) *sniff* Oh dear, Ivy. You're so cruel! (snuggles up to Sessy and Inuyasha plushies)
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really sad chapter. My eyes watered towards the end and all I could think is how Inuyasha's children will react. Yes, they know their mother is sick but I don't think they will expect to hear that he is dying. Will they ever know about that big fight? I doubt it, I think Inuyasha will let them have a peaceful life with their father even if he is not around. But I wonder if Sesshoumaru could live with the blame of his mate's death?
I was not sure about seeing Sesshoumaru break down, it was a little odd but 10 years away from the person you love and the stress of giving them even more pain that they are under would make the strongest man break down. I wasn't sure if I wanted to sympathize but I did, he is losing his mate while regaining his children. And to be honest, I don't want Inuyasha to die, after so much sacrifice, I have to say that it really and totally sucks.
But I won't stop reading,ahh, it really hurt but I will continue reading through the whole 50 years. 28 years more to go.
You write well...I already read one chapter and I can't wait for the next.
Thanks!
I was not sure about seeing Sesshoumaru break down, it was a little odd but 10 years away from the person you love and the stress of giving them even more pain that they are under would make the strongest man break down. I wasn't sure if I wanted to sympathize but I did, he is losing his mate while regaining his children. And to be honest, I don't want Inuyasha to die, after so much sacrifice, I have to say that it really and totally sucks.
But I won't stop reading,ahh, it really hurt but I will continue reading through the whole 50 years. 28 years more to go.
You write well...I already read one chapter and I can't wait for the next.
Thanks!
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's weird but i can't seem to stop crying. so, update
soon.
soon.
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Somehow I missed when the previous chapter got posted because I was a few paragraphs down in ch. 15 before I realized I had no idea what was going on, then I had to go back:) I understand the reasoning better now, though if it were me personally I'd leave a million samples then take the chance. But I guess that's just me, I try to take shortcuts as I can to make things go as quick as possible, that's probably why my chem lab instructor always looked like she wanted to cry when it was time for my class period:D Moving on, I like what you did with Kouga, the suffering was nice, though I wish Sesshoumaru had gotten there quicker. Oh well:'( I'm feeling a bit sad and also a bit confused, sad becase Inuyasha is dying but also confused because it's only been 22 years. Or am I confusing the whole 50 years thing, not 50 years of marriage but 50 of something else. Anyways I feel bad for his kids, I don't know what I'd do without my mom, but at least now they're back with they're dad and he can help them. Though I'm still holding out the hope that there will be a happy surprise and somehow one of the kids or Sesshoumaru or someone will be able to figure something out to help Inuyasha. Like maybe the Tenseigea, it brought Rin back to life and healed her, maybe it could work on Inuyasha too. Yes yes I like that idea very much. Anyways I think I'm starting to sound a little inane and that I'm going to go to sleep now before I sound any stupider.
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heyyyyy!!! whats gonig on, i thought they were going to live happy everafter, can izao or izyao save him like last time, please allow inuyasha to live.
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn make a person cry why don't you. Please don't kill Inu Yasha *pouts*
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sesshoumaru!
Finally finding Inu then learning he's going to die!
You're evil!
Finally finding Inu then learning he's going to die!
You're evil!