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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised there's a nother chapter, usually death is the end, but I don't mind. I prefer realistic endings to happy ones though.
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, that was sooooooooo sad. V.V update soon.
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story was great up to the point where the 'Rape' took place..It's never 'GOOD READING,' to me, personally, to read stuff like that, and i find authors who do, N/C to bee unimaginatiive, and just 'not good' enough..I don't find it necessary to have it in the story...So many authors tend to go down that road that it's sicken and just plain lame!!!
Rape dowsn't add drama, if that's what you were aiming for, it's not dramatic event...Everytime that i come across a piece of writing that has 'Rape' in it, that's always Inuyasha's character, of course, stupid, anyway, it's just plain disappointing too read..
I don't unnderstand how an author can't come up with anything better...??
Anyway, overall, a good read..
The last scene brought tears too my eyes.. I'll give this story a 7 out of a 10.. It would be a 10 out of a 10..
Rape dowsn't add drama, if that's what you were aiming for, it's not dramatic event...Everytime that i come across a piece of writing that has 'Rape' in it, that's always Inuyasha's character, of course, stupid, anyway, it's just plain disappointing too read..
I don't unnderstand how an author can't come up with anything better...??
Anyway, overall, a good read..
The last scene brought tears too my eyes.. I'll give this story a 7 out of a 10.. It would be a 10 out of a 10..
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn you... Now I'm drowning in my own pool of tears. Only two stories had made me cry, and one of them is yours. I totaly love this story. It's touching and so different from all the others. I hope Tenseiga will work out and the happiness will once again come to the house of Taisho. You did a really good job on this story and I hope you will continue it. I'm looking forward to read the next chapter.
Sincerely, White Youkai
Sincerely, White Youkai
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG you had me in tears. This was heartwrenching, but very very good writing, as always.
Congratulations on your new family member, and I am sorry to hear you had to deal with the turmoil you did the last few months. That sort of thing is never easy.
Congratulations on your new family member, and I am sorry to hear you had to deal with the turmoil you did the last few months. That sort of thing is never easy.
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*starts to cry uncontrollably* nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooooooooooooooo! inu can't die......its just not right all the things he went through, it's not right. *sobs* what will happen to the kids now that their mother is gone, will gin ever let sesshy into his heart? what about the twins? *sniffles* inuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!......ok i will stop crying for right now....luved the chpater (though it was very sad) keep up the great writing and hope things work out for you. ok.......bye....*sighs*
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It seems almost like you heard my prayers. I love your story, I really do. It is well written and the plot is not boring. It is really wonderful. So this chapter was so heartbreaking, I really felt for the children that were losing their mom and I also felt for Sesshoumaru for losing his mate. I am curious on how the rest of the 50 years are going to play out, this chapter felt so final. I was thinking that you could have ended the fic there and it would have been such a beautiful tragic story. But I am glad that there is more to it. That is why I am so curious on how the plot is going to continue.
I do want to say that I hope things go well for you. RL can be so difficult when you don't expect it and what you have gone through is very difficult. I am sending you a hug and good wishes that things get better. *hugs*
I do want to say that I hope things go well for you. RL can be so difficult when you don't expect it and what you have gone through is very difficult. I am sending you a hug and good wishes that things get better. *hugs*
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was so sad! *cries*
I am so glad that it isn't the last chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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That was so sad! *cries*
I am so glad that it isn't the last chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yey!!!! Finally an update!!! This is the only story in Inuyasha/Sesshomaru Im reading... :) I go out once a week to see if you have updated... :) I really love this story. You are a great writer.. :) Thank you for sharing this with ous.. :) Hugs Aihythil
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am like totally heartbroken and sad right now. I guess I got too caught up in this story b/c I'm fighting tears right now. This was very well written and I do look forward to the next chapter.