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for Fifty Years

by nika1280

person Dai
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh shit! *sorry for the cursing* i was wondering what he had! figures it was that...this story is so sad but so good!!!!!!!!! omg im practically crying! this is the best inuyasha story i've read. this is like my first sessh/inu fic and i will love this story forever. i havent studied for my spanish test and it's about 11:15. if i fail it was all worth it. this story is good. it had my heart hurting. they could make a movie outta this. *tears* please continue. i cant wait to read what happens. i hope tenseiga works and heals inu. he deserves to live. omg i must be in shock...i cant get over how great this is. ima go see if you have other stories. you are a great writer. it almost seems like a book. im astonished. i'll have to examine you work and possibly use it when i write papers. if ya dont mind. im horrible at writing....lol. well keep up the great work! cant wait for the next chappie! =D
person icefox
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so inuyasha had leukimia? i thought they had a cure for it! but then it was way back when...i guess they wouldn't have known. i hope that doesn't happen with me, my 10 year old sister has it. good story, can't wait to hear how they get inuyasha back, you'd think that sesshomaru would use tenseiga but i guess you can't always rely on it. ^^
person Tricia
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far-Inuyasha dying made me cry like a baby ! One huge queston----In Sess has Tensaiga, he can bring Inu back to life---so why all the goodbyesa nd sadness, etc? Or are u not planning on having Sess use Tensaiga? Can't wait for u to update! Btw-whatever happened to Rin?? I know Sango and Miroku dies and Shippo and Kiara live together, but where's Rin?!
person SP777
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I..have..NEVER..in my life read a story that Inuyasha dying much less dead.

This story makes me want to get a posse..and go after the author with torches. O_o

My goodness! This is a story meant for an Award! An author not afraid to take a main character in a completely different scenario. Can't wait to see what you do in the other chapters.

..and I hope your situations get better than what it is now, as a matter of fact it will, even though it doesn't seem like it.

*sorry don't have an email, still not registered on this site.
person Evanescences
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely amazing...I started to cry at the end, when they were saying goodbye to Inuyasha. I cannot wait until the next installment comes out, and will be greatly eager to read it. You are a fabulous writer.
person Lavinia
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was horrible! You made me cry! you cruel... cruel... AUTHOR!! (keh, that was lame...) HOW COULD YOU BE SO CRUEL??

truth to be told, had you ended it any other way it would have been sappy and I would have hated it...
this was the very first good Sess/Inu story I have read.... really good job! I espesially liked the way you didn't make heir relationship too easy, and how you didn't pay attention to tha truth that incect is frowned upon... then again, they're demons, what do we know of what is allowed in their sosiety... really good...
person Steel Butterfly430
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have no words....

Well, I thought up a few. First, IF HE DIES MARU HAD BETTER BE ABLE TO USE HIS SWORD TO BRING YASHA BACK!!!!! (sorry,my little devil escaped)

Okay, second, it was so sad. And funny. I mean, are you gonna keep Yasha barefoot and pregnant their whole lives together? I thought that having Maru's carbon copy have Yasha's mannerisms and personality was a nice touch. I can see that child kinda holding a different place in his heart than the others' (if you're a parent, we all know it's true. Relax) do, but yeah.

Oh, are the children supposed to be paired up the way they are? Or am I just seeing what I wanna see? Like, the 2 girls, the twins, the two that have the spiritual powers. Why not make Gin and Reo be close.

Anyway, long rambling just to say this one was intriguing and I'm glad I finally read it and I can't wait for the next chapter.

~SB
person roora takanashi
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG this story was absolutly amazing. I cried as i read the end. You ave an amazing talent for writing the depth and emotion of the human soul. ther are no words to describe the feeling and emotion you put into this story.I congradulate you on this story and wish you all the best of luck in the future with your other stories.

sincerely,
roora takanashi
person kelly
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*big, teary animated eyes* wah! that was so sad! i can't wait for the next chapter to be up, but i'll wait patiently ^_^ good job with it, it's so sad that i kinda wanna cry for poor sess and the kids. keep up the good work
person say what?
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay i'm confused should ur story end once inu is dead? seriously draggin it out for so long is getting boring. i dont wanna hear about the kids... they're great but aren't likeable in my opinion they are more one-sided not 3 demensional. ugh i cant read this anymore the first part is good so thank u for that.