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for Fifty Years

by nika1280

person neko
schedule June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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beautifull and interesting story !!! i can't wait for inu and sesshy to meet again!! waiiiii

love your story soooo much!! thank you for writing such a beautifull and interesting story
person Princess Sin
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so, koga is the exiled. i never would have thought
it. but really, how can he blame inuyasha. he has
known all along that kagome loved inuyasha and
not him. he brought all that on himself. will koga
realize that its his own fault and not inuyasha's?
anyway, great chapter. i'm waiting patiently for
the next chapter.
person SP777
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated w/ chap. 10, because you kind of sprung that surprise out of the blue! I was like 'what exile?!?'

I was thinking...too bad there isn't a priestess around who could put a healing sleep on Inuyasha until a cure is found or something of that nature....thank goodness for Jinengi [sp?] hopefully he can help.
person nette
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i hope sessh makes it in time to catch up with myouga before kouga gets to inu and harms his family. please update soon, its getting good.
person neko
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i relly love your story, i get more and more interesting every chapter. i just can't wait for sesshy and inu to meet again. also want to see their children in more mature form. i think the twin now was 18 years old ne?? hope you post more soon ^^ *hug and candy bar for you*
person ArchNemesis
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I knew chasing after Kogame would be the means to his end. Kouga's so low that I don't think that anything that he does will bring him back up, and he has the nerve to blame Inuyasha for all his problems. Gosh, I thought Sesshoumaru was a jerk, humph, I guess I was wrong.

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next the next chapter. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~
person nette
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i liked this chapter and the new story can't wait to read it sounds interesting keep it up
person Caitriona
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. You did well giving us a look at Sess's view of the whole debacle with Izayoi and the courtiers. You also did a good job showing the concern and worry that he has for Inu's current state. Why, I wonder, hasn't he traveled in his glowing ball state? it seems that it would be much quicker....or is Myoga the only one who can get him to Jininji?

I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Caitriona
person blaire
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
in the beginning, i thought this wz just a nice, fluffy story that sess wz reminiscing about and read it for the pure fluffiness of it. then comes chapter 7 (right?) and BAM! you make this story completely breath-taking! you are one of the most amazing authorz i've ever read and also one of the most cruel ones too. how could you have just left it there????? i can't wait till u update! umm...teeny weeny doubt... what hppnd to miroku, sango and kagome??? and how come kirara's with shippo? oh well, i really hope you update sooN!
person MsDesperate
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God!! I am sitting here crying right now. This story is so sensitive and emotional please keep on writing
because it's good.Any story that can make me cry is goo. No not good, astounding. I am begging you with red
puffy eyes to keep on writing. *sniffle* thank you *sniffle*