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for Fifty Years

by nika1280

person mcdgoddess
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I almost jumped out of my chair for joy, I was so excitied that there was a new chapter! I thought Sesshoumaru had his work cut out for him before, but now I have NO idea what so ever how he will be able to fix his family. Koga's torture scene was INTENSE! I have heard about parts being cut off, but to have your balls MELTED off, MY GOD YOU'RE PURE GENIUS!!!!!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE don't have me have to wait too long for the next chapter! Keep up the kick ass work because I only see this story becoming even GREATER than what it already is!
person Ren
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh, my gosh, wow, im at a total loss of words.........well wow......hey keep writing i really want to know what happens next
person SP777
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Rearding #14...

:blink: O_o :blink: O_o

:blink: O_o :blink: O_o

Good Lawd!!!!!! :-O Now THAT is something I haven't read about Sesshoumaru...him cutting loose & done
in SUCH detail.

You tha' girl! O___O

See me likes surprises every now & then in stories. Oh yeah, I've been checking out the other story, but I'll wait to review.

person SP777
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
spelling error [Regarding #14]

..one other thing, since everyone else gushed about it.

I am SOOO glad you reunited Sesshoumaru with his babies!!!! *sniff* :-( ... :-D

You don't realize how on edge AND in anticipation people were waiting for THAT reunion, now the mates are united. *sigh*
Nothing but love...
person neko
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! angry sess is really reaaalllly scary!!! poor koga.......but he deserved it couse he rape inuyasha!! will ayame be sad that koga died??

great chapter !! heheheh now i cant wait to read when inuyasha awake and found sess with him ^^
i hope inuyasha sickness can be cured. cant wait to read more bout sess and inuginsenshi (kyaaaaa mini sess *hug*)

Love YOU and Love your FIC ^^
person Demitria Miriam
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...

(O)_(O)

I can't... even say anything right now.... except, FUCK YEAH! (does a little victory dance for Sesshou)



-DM
person ArchNemesis
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! How could you let Kouga do that to Inuyasha? You're mean I say, MEAN! But has to admit that Sessshoumaru did what any mate would do. Now, hopefully that can get on with their lives. But I know that's not as easy as it sound, right? Right.

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. I want see if Inuyasha forgives Sesshoumaru about what happened all those years ago. And as well as if Sesshoumaru has to face another plot of someone else trying to take-over his claim as Lord of the Western Lands.

Please update soon! And have save and wonderful 4th of July!

Nemesis ^_~
person Sir Magus
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like ur story alot-wit the exception that i find it really hard to believe that inyasha would call sesshomaru "sess"(its porbbly more wat u like to call him an i understand that so its ok. and wats wit havin inuyasha turn into a girl durin birth? ok i understand that his name does mean female dog an all but come on makin him a girl?-eh watever im ovr it i hope u will continue to write more chapters and post em im lookin forward to it!
person darksilk
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I love this stroy usually i'm not up
for a m-preg story but I loved this. It's so sweet and sad and though
you Sess was being a complete ass I still love how much he cares for
his family. I can't wait to read more and I'm going to start on
your other story cause it sounds great so far.
person Bookworm51485
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love what you have written so far, though I wish I'd waited until the story was complete before I started reading it. Now I have to wait for a new chapter to find out what Kouga's doing to Inuyasha and what Sesshoumaru's going to do to him. Kouga truly is an idiot, his revenge blinded him to the point that he didn't even think about the consequences. Not only will Sesshoumaru be pissed at whatever he does to Inuyasha but he'll be doubly pissed that Kouga attacked his kids. He wasn't thinking very far ahead with this moronic idea of revenge. I hope that whatever Sesshoumaru does do to him, it's not quick. Though I have a question, or something that was bit confusing to me. Sesshoumaru was with Jinenji for 6 weeks, why did he not just take the time Jinenji said it would take to analyze the poison and create an antidote and find Inuyasha and bring him back to Jinenji so by the time that happened the antidote would be ready. And he might have been able to head off Kouga and avoid whatever bad thing Kouga's doing to him now. Oh well, now that Sesshoumaru's here hopely he can kick Kouga's ass and get Inuyasha back (hopefully whatever Kouga's doing won't cause Inuyasha to degenerate quicker) and then they can all go home and hopefully Inuyasha will be cured. I dunno, maybe I'm assuming things too much but since the story is called 50 years and it's only 20 years in, I'm thinking that Sesshoumaru will save the day. Though with the 50 years there's no guarantee that Inuyasha won't still be dying. Too many question, too late at night. I'm going to bed now and I hope I see an update soon.