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for A lost love

by sesshomarunaraku

person nchsmi
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Don't take so long, writing the next chapter! This was awesome! B reading U!
person DINKA
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter... although, poor doggy... he was raped!!!!

want to read more... please, keep your story going!!!!

and i want to hear what the dog remembered of the night...if he remembers at all!!!
person ym
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting... now I want to know what will happen?
person memorietrail
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it was great.i still want more.
person gen
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm. i see you will unfold the details slowly.
i'm not very fond of long suspenseful stuff and well,
in a book, all one has to do is continue to read to know more,
not quite the same when one is reading a fic on installment.

still interesting. more so. glad you continued.
person gen
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm. i see you will unfold the details slowly.
i'm not very fond of long suspenseful stuff and well,
in a book, all one has to do is continue to read to know more,
not quite the same when one is reading a fic on installment.

still interesting. more so. glad you continued.
person memorietrail
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh please let ther be more.
person mrmorietrail
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh please don't stop there. more please
person gen
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting beginning.
but that's about all i can comment - it's too short -
in length, and in details, and well, the plot is just beginning....
person chineseartist
schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aaah! i don't know what's going on! help me!