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for A lost love

by sesshomarunaraku

person syndey
schedule October 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
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person asialisek
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have an interesting start to this story, and I am curious where you are going with it, but the grammar and spelling errors are so distracting that I can't concentrate on reading it.
It would be best if you found someone to Beta your work, because as it is, it's really hard to even follow what's going one.

Good Luck.
person B
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a very intresting story, I don't think I have read another like this. I hope you plan on finishing this story.
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I don't feel like log-outing my sister..so this CassandraD not AJAngelique.
Who gets to tell Sess he's half dragon?
CassandraD
person VOYUERER
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome beginging, please continue.
person saosin
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon , this story got me glued to the pc
person DINKA
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
in this chapter u are implying that sesshomaru is the product of their coupling, ru not?!!!
if i am correct...cool!!!!that would be a great way to explain the powers of sesshy that involve venom!!!

for another...cool explanation of why the doggy does not remember anything... he's the strongest when they battle...
keep on going....
person snowflake
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love your story.
Update soon.
Is this supposed to be Shessy's parents?
person HPTR Fangirl
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is the dog Inu No Taishou? Does that mean Sesshouamru would be this dragon's (Ryouketssai, spelling?)and Inu no Taishous's son? Though I don't like rape scene, I skipped that part though, but I still could get the idea flown through. Write more.
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is so good so far i hope that u continue it.