rate_review Reviews

Awwwww KAGS&KOGA 4EVER!!!

absolutely beautiful writing. I totally bought his love for her -- and every word seemed like poetry.

aww that is good! kind of sad but a good story

....Not exactly what I would call 'R' material...xDDD
But still rather good. Continue please. Preety preety please?

That was really beautiful. Perhaps a bit ooc for dear Kouga, but it was wonderful writing. I especially liked the comparison of Kagome to a beach saving a shipwrecked sailor.

Sweet *God* have mercy on my *soul*, I wish that wasn't a one-shot. Wow...oh wow, wow, wow, that had to be the greatest, deepest dive into Kouga's brooding love as I have ever read. I always figured he *really* loves her, that it may start out superficial, but it grows into something only you have managed to capture. Sweet, blessed, holy...stuff...this was beautiful. After reading this and 'Ribbon Blue', I think I may have to be your groupie.

i loved it

Oh my, I think that was really, really brilliant! I like the thought of Kouga actually loving Kagome instead of just... lusting after her ability to see shards (now if only all men actually loved women instead of only wanting sex with them...)
*sighs* You know, I think you should continue with this story - maybe you could make one chapters in Kougas and the other chapter in Kagomes POV... the possibilitys are endless! If only I could write fanfiction, but, trust me in this: I can't.
Anyways, maybe you'll make up your mind and make this one-shot a lots-of-chapters - story. With Kagome and Kouga being together and happy in the end of couse ;p
hugs and hopes - clavira