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hey come on, this is a good story, i love it!!! it sucked big time when i got to this chapter cuz i wunna know what happens. here's my email, leslierodriguez42@yahoo.com. please tell me when u update!! i can't wait when the first 2 suitors find out she got 4 more n with INU-YASHA!!! keep updating cuz its good!!

Your story is really good. I'm at at lost for words, so keep up the good work. I think this story should be a Kagome/Youko/Sesshomaru fiction. That would be a really good pairing. :)

Wow...just wow. I couldn't get past chapter 3 without wanting to rip out my teeth. Spell check wouldn't hurt, and doing research and double checking your overall grammar would not kill you, this is for future reference before you start writing another story.

You also are doing what so many people love to do in the Inuyasha fandom, and that's making Kagome too powerful. The beauty of Kagome is that she is normal and a regular girl. Yes, odd things do happen to her and she wouldn't be considered to have a normal life but she's normal and not an all-powerful miko like so many writers like you describe. You should add OOC to the warnings on this, because I wouldn't even consider her Kagome anymore. Also, last thing I am going to bitch about is your use of the Japanese language.

When the attempt of using Japanese terms in a story, by all means yes it's an anime fandom, so essentially it is Japanese, but if it's not your native language, you shouldn't bother. Write in English, no one is going to think badly of you if don't throw in Japanese words that you are using in the wrong context to begin with. You might think it's witty or that you’re sticking with the story more but it seems pretentious.

Honey, what you need is a beta reader and a really good one at that.

I apologize if this sounds harsh.

I would like to point out that if you have seen Memoirs of a Geisha it is fairly accurate and would help in reading this story. Which by the way i like very much.

You know if you don't like what someone has to say then what is the point of reading their story. Do you really need to find poeple that make mistackes and bitch about it. If you don't don't like the story then stop reading and go eleswhere. Don't be a child about it and say unneeded shit. If all you wanted to do correct the mistake that was made then you need to find a better way to do it. Or Did you mommy never teach you any better . But anyway I for one Love the story and do hope that you update again soon.

This is a great story. I do hope that you update again soon. i have never read anything like this before. I think this is a great story. Hope to see some more soon. Keep up the great work.

Please, write more!!! I enjoy it; and I'd like to see who Kagome gets with! I vote for Yoko Kuruma and Sesshomaru! ^_^

For a quick history lesson, most Asian cultures are not fond of other Asian cultures. Koreans (especially older generations) still hold on to a lot of bad blood due to things that occurred during the Japanese occupation. Even ignoring that, despite the blanket “Asian” term, each country has considerable differences. So asking a “pure blood Korean” to translate Japanese is rather like walking up to a random white person and asking them to translate French.

Now how does that saying go? Beggars can’t be choosers? News flash, sugar. You’re posting your story to public forum. Which means you’re going to get people who respond to you in a variety of ways. I don’t know you and feel absolutely no obligation to cater to your delicate feelings. I’m not in the slightest bit insulted to be referred to as a bitch by you, mainly because you’re only proving my point. You say: “Those who judge a person about what knowledge they have picked up from others are truly idiots.” Actually, it’s the ones who don’t do research to make sure the information they’re getting from said others is correct and then expect to be praised for their lack of accuracy who corner that market.

The only thing better than being willing to absorb information is making sure the information you’re so eager to absorb is actually correct.

Oh, yeah?! Well, MY Mom is Turkish (full-blooded!), and SHE says that a geisha is a type of salamander! So there!

(But seriously, if you found out that you'd made an egregious error in an earlier chapter, why on earth didn't you go back and CORRECT it? It doesn't take a Herculean effort to edit chapters on this or any other fanfic site. Nor does it take much effort to actually look up the words you purport to define; if you'd done that, you'd know that Inu-Yasha - 犬夜叉 - does not, in fact, mean "female dog demon." Takahashi-sensei herself explained this in an interview. "Inu" = dog, "yasha" = forest spirit. Do you really believe that the manga-ka would make such a glaring mistake in her native language?)

You really should rechecked your Japanese. "Okinawa- fruit bat" Considering that this is an island in the Sea of Japan, and one of the prefectures of Japan, it is highly doubtful that they call it 'fruit bat'.