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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
While you did make a mistake about the meaning of the word Geisha, I think people should learn to let bygones be bygones. The ama who wrote you such a rude review should learn that if she can't keep her mouth shut about something that's already been corrected then don't say nothin' at all. I'm sorry but people like that just piss me off to no end, Yes I can be a bitch at times but I try to be as nice as possible when writing a review. I always try to give the author advice that hasn't ben given before and at the least boost their spirits with a helpful comment or two. I sn't that what reviewing startedout as anyway? Besides I'm probably one of the few people who will admit(then again maybe not) that I even thought a Geisha was a type of whore. Whore's were generally found in Brothels from what I understand. I know now that they aren't a type of whore and that they are respected more than that, but at one point in time I didn't. As For my vote on the pairings I think that in a crossover like this the Kurama(Youko/Suichi)/Kagome pairing is prefered. I was just wondering something, though, you do know that Youko and Suichi are two seperate souls in one body and thus they have in a way merged personalities to create Kurama and as thus cannot be seperated at all. From what I understan Kurams is a Kitsune Avatar which is a being I'm still not to sure about but as I said Before he harbors two souls in one body. Also from what I understand Youko's soul will eventually become one with Suichi's. At least that's what I keep hearing from everyone that I talk to and I've also seen it stated in some fanfictions and even on some YYH websites, so I 'm not sure if it's true or not but you can always surf the web to find out, ne? Anyways I've got to go. My dinner is about to burn I think. Byez.
Sayonara,
Sakura Seijiro Son Takahashi Minamino
"AKA"
TaiYokai Meiinu Inuraku Hiisho Ryuu Takahashi
Sayonara,
Sakura Seijiro Son Takahashi Minamino
"AKA"
TaiYokai Meiinu Inuraku Hiisho Ryuu Takahashi
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
While what Fred may say may be true don't assume he's right about the Shina thing I know in what context you mean that it means virtuous. You mean in the context of a given name such as Shina Himura(Think Kenshin Himura)
or Kikyou Which means bellflower. Am I right? Anyways got to go. Byez.
Sayonara,
Sakura Seijiro Son Takahashi Minamino
"AKA"
TaiYokai Meiinu Inuraku Hiisho Ryuu Takahashi
or Kikyou Which means bellflower. Am I right? Anyways got to go. Byez.
Sayonara,
Sakura Seijiro Son Takahashi Minamino
"AKA"
TaiYokai Meiinu Inuraku Hiisho Ryuu Takahashi
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really, REALLY love your story! It's so entertaining, and I can't help but laugh out loud at some parts! It's just so funny! I was just wondering if i can vote for Kagome getting more than one mate. Not that I want to make her into a slut, or anything, but it would be really interesting to see what sort of situations would accur, because of jealousy! But, then again, that's just what I think! Keep on writing, I can't wait to read more!
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June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, i love your story! its great! usually i dont reveiw but i couldnt help it! anyway, i feel sorry for kagome! i bet she'll be pissed next chapter. i cant wait to find out...i still think she should end up with youko...with lots of lemons and future kits. ^.^ update soon!
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June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your story. I do hope you post again soon.
As far as the flames go I believe completely with what my friend once said, "They're all flamin' moron's that were probally hurt at some point and in thier idiocy feel the need to hurt others rather than end the cycle of flaming abuse."
My friend writes as well and believes whole heartedly in CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. I'm sorry you had to receive contact from a moron who has not learned kindness.
Your story is very amusing to me and a few errors is human, do not let them stop you.
As far as the flames go I believe completely with what my friend once said, "They're all flamin' moron's that were probally hurt at some point and in thier idiocy feel the need to hurt others rather than end the cycle of flaming abuse."
My friend writes as well and believes whole heartedly in CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. I'm sorry you had to receive contact from a moron who has not learned kindness.
Your story is very amusing to me and a few errors is human, do not let them stop you.
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June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Some people have absolutely no way with words i swear...if u want i can kick Kei's ass for ya *grins and cracks knuckles*. Hehehe anywayz i am absolutely loving your story its simply amazing and i can't wait for you to update some more. *dances around in happiness* Simply marvelous, simply amazing...IT WAS F'in AWESOME. *blushes* When you get the chance If it's not to much of and effort could you please email me to let me know you updated, THANKS. Ja Mata Airy
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June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eh, I feel bad for poor Inuyasha. Oh and Kagome is a WEE bit to powerful. The story is okay but the fact that Inuyasha is VERY much out of char. it kinda killed my reading. I happen to like Inuyasha even though I like Kagome and Youko Kuruma.
Poor Inuyasha......
Poor Inuyasha......
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June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far. I also don't blame you for your misconseption of the term Geisha. Although you didn't look for the info at the beginning you didn't insult them on purpose. You simply used your resources at hand to aid your story in it's culture and text. Many others have made that mistake if not everyone at at least one time in their life. Don't listen to them. They are hipocrits. I am at fault myself on my own level though I try not to be. Now back to your story. It's very well written and I love the way you give each character their own sense of depth. It's an amazing ability showing that not only are you a skilled writer but you accually take time to hone and use your skills correctly instead of just sending in slop. Consider this reader impressed.
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June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! I'm glad no one like has reviewed for my one story on ff.net. So, anyway I loved your story so far and I'm looking forward to the next chapter! ^__^