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for Finding You

by o0kittyblue0o

schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, WTH?! NO MORE! Damn it... And it was at the good part too!! *pouts* Update soon? *Puppy dog eyes* thanks!! Oh and, I vote Youko on this one! Not a lot of crossover fics out there ",
So, update, aight? See yah!!
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i vote for youko!!!!!!! with her haveing a kit as a son it only makes since :P anyhow this is a wonderful story so far. i cant wait to read more of it. so please update this again soon.
person Rarisma
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing! Keep writing! I'd love for Kagome to end up with Sesshomaru AND Kurama. Kurama, instead of Youko, only because you've got your story going that way already. If not Sesshomaru, then The Lord of the East. If she only ends up with one person, then Kurama or Youko! PLEASE POST SOON! Love your story!
person ptbear
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Can't wait to read who Kagome chooses. Hopefully Youko and Sesshomaru the rest can find someone else.
person Chibes
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, you are so detailed! good job. The geisha thing don't worry about it...I got an idiot yelling at me for my fic at FFN...I made a joke about asians eating cats and dogs and she took it the wrong way. I thought a geisha did everything shy of sex...they were entertainers.

I loved this story so much...
person Neko
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, i'm glad the whole Geisha thing is sorted out, and good to know an author can accept their mistakes from time to time *some can't, for random reasons i will never understand* however *and please don't take this the wrong way* but your response to Kei's comments, in some ways, were over the top. For all you know Kei may have found your original description highly insulting *due to personal reasons maybe?) and though this doesn't warrant the type of review they left, you should think carefully before responding with such comments as they can go and kill themselves.
person Neko
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hello. . .again ^^ I completely forget, but....! *drum roll* kag/sess/youko ^^ that would be cool, but in time of hardship, either pairing is good, though kag/youko looks better in this fic to be honest ^^ tada! my words of wisdom will carry generation's to come ^^ (gah! i'm hyper now)

person me
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow... you rock!^-^ I hope Kagome ends up with Kurama, that'll mean the story is longer too! I wonder if she'll believe that Kurama is youko... Will she be depressed when she has to go back home? WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN? PDATE SOON PLEASE!
person Lucarna
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update Please please please
person Nana-chan
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As I was beginning to read the second chapter, I decided to click on your profile to check if you have more stories uploaded. You don't so I clicked on the reviews for this story instead. What met me were people bitching at you for the geisha thing and using a spellchecker and I just want to say: WHAT THE FUCK?

I too was slightly offended at your wrong definition of a geisha, winced your inaccurate Japanese translations and cringed at your spelling mistakes, but I don't think you deserve the bitchy reviews that you got. If you want to revise your mistakes then good. If you don't, whatever. It's your choice. THIS IS ONLY FANFICTION, PEOPLE. If the author SELLS her stuff and makes money off of this, then bitch all you want but IT'S NOT.

SO WHAT if the author has fallen into the all-powerful Kagome trap that most authors in the Inuyasha fandom has overused? You don't like it? Then DON'T FUCKING READ IT! DON'T FUCKING REVIEW AND PUT THE AUTHOR DOWN. DON'T RUIN IT FOR THE AUTHOR AND THE REST OF US WHO ENJOY READING THIS!

I have this pet peeve about spelling and you spelled DEFINITELY wrong, but I won't bite your head off for it. Yes, I agree with some of the flamers when they said that your Korean heritage doesn't have anything to do with anything Japanese (except for the fact that yes, some Asian countries especially Korea are still sore about the Japanese invasion - I know my grandparents are), but I also believe in NOT BEING RUDE.

If a person is misinformed, you should just tell her what she thought/did wrong, not flame her for it! THIS IS ONLY FANFICTION! And you, author, you should get your facts straight before posting them, especially your little notes or opinions, because as you are well aware of now, some people who know the truth are rude bitches. I speak Chinese, Malay and a little Japanese but I never claim to be an expert online because I don't want to be flamed by bitches who have nothing else to do. The internet is full of them. My advice to you is just to ignore them.

Take the high road. Apologize for your mistakes and try not to repeat the same pattern. Yes people make mistakes, so try not to contribute to the misinformation please. You don't have to use Japanese words if you're not sure about them. Giving out an incorrect definition will only give the flamers things to bitch about. I found this story on FF.net and you mis-defined Okinawa (not a fruit bat, it's one of the Japanese islands, far south of Honshu), Kitsune (not a "fox demon", but only "fox"), koumori (not a "bat demon", but only "bat"), Soramiru (There isn't such a word. Sora = sky; miru = to see, to watch), fuchui (??? Careless = nonki, uwasuberi, zonzai, nonki, boyaboya but I've never heard of "fuchui" before), kakkera (if you want "shards" or "fragments", it's spelled as "kakera")... just to name a few.

I didn't mean to give you an impromptu lesson, and I don't mean to sound all-knowing, but it really is frustrating when people give out false information. I just don't think that I should be rude about telling you you're wrong.

That aside, I'll be posting this on your FF story as well, so you're sure to read it.

As a closing point, I'd like to say that I like your story. I don't care if Kagome is super powered and I'm even willing to ignore the mistakes. It's a good story nonetheless and I hope you continue it.

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