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Nice Job. I have been awaiting an update with much anticipation. Please keep up the good work and thank you for updating.

wow. that's all i have to say. and yes you are right it was time for another sessh/inu joining. next chapter seems pretty heated so i can't wait to read that. as for trish that wench deserves to her ass fried. poor dante i hope things get better for him, and with his new son he could only feel a bit remorseful for having to give up his firstborn. you should have him visit her or some kind of ruin between them, but then that might just make things worse. oh well, as usually you know the routine update soon.

Despite the non-beta, it's ALL good! :-)

about #30...

Uh oh..it ain't good when your mate starts lying to you, it starts to become easy in the long run AND what happens when the mate finds out?

..and yes it's about DAMN time you focused on the Inu brothers a bit. They were
feeling neglected. :-(

SO..Sparda & this Izumi are having the 'war of the words' over Toga[Inutaisho].

You don't have to respond to this one, this is mostly small talk...to myself. O_o

Yay, New Moon Loving. I loved it. Inuyasha sure knows how to get his mate to do his bidding. I'm glad they had a happy memory before the extended family comes. *sigh* I see trouble ahead for my boys. I don't think Sesshomaru is going to take too kindly to people questioning him and his decisions, and I definitely don't think Inuyasha's going to be happy to know that his mate was keeping secrets. Bring on the drama (but not too much)! Great chapter as usual.

about # 29...

you know as I sit here and think, it suddenly hit me...I WISH Trish was more of a
fighter that way Sesshomaru would have had more time to deliver a heavy dose of
'whoop-ass'. :-)

by the way, what kind of devil is she? she seems kind of weak...

next chapter seems to be funny. cant wait to read that. and man oh man is trish in for it now. well she deserves it that wench. i wonder what dante will say or do when vergil finally awakes. how will toga deal with trish and what will happen when they annouce inu/sesshy's mating. so many questions so little time so without furhter ado, update soon and great writing

Uh oh--Trish got poisoned. Can't say I feel sorry for the skank--anyone desperate enough to conceive a child that they poison another person and rape them gets no pity from me. I just love Sesshomaru on the prowl, I must say. I did like the bite marks and gouges Trish received from her tryst with Vergil. She deserved all the pain she felt and then some.

From the teaser, it appears the family is coming for a visit. Can't wait to see how well that goes over.

i wouldn't want to be trish at the moment if i were her. she went toofar and i don't think sesshy will be too kind to her this time around. and what will dante think when and if toga tells him what happened. and also will vergil survive? i don't think dante could handle his lost let alone the betrayal he'll feel when and if he finds out. can't wait to read more and i hope you update soon.

Yay--Toga to the rescue. I'm glad he was there at the right time. Damn that Trish! I really, really, really hope that Vergil at least did some damage to her during sex. She's so psychotic and determined to keep man that she's willing to drug his brother in order to rape him to force him to impregnate her? And that by drugging said brother, she's effectively sentenced him to death? I do so hope he got a few gouges in, but left enough for Sesshomaru. I can't wait until he goes on the hunt! Good stuff, Nemesis!

about # 28...

I know how you like to write short chapters, but THAT one snuck up on my ass
and whacked me upside the head! That was ridiculously short!

Now, for the review... :-)

Toga [Inutaisho] & Sparda, I think their relationship was more about *provocative
teasing especially from Sparda, but considering what section this story is in I'm
sure they experimented once.

As for Sesshomaru going to get Trish, bad..very...VERY bad. :-/

I can see the lawsuit waiting to happen now...battery, ass-whoppings, abuse, beatings,
and severe head trauma BEFORE she makes it to the castle! Hah! :-)

*maybe I should have said explicit teasing, not provocative..