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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
why must you tease us so? this chapter was worth the wait. man i wish you had inu smack kumiko that would have been freaking hilarious, bet that would have stopped her ranting there, well for a little while at least. and does my eyes deceive me when i read that inu was sick, do we have a new set of litters on the way? perhaps? anyway cant wait to read more, so update soon. oh and trish is preggy, all i can say is...damn....
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehe, I love how you had Inu FREAK Kumiko out by nursing Mizuki! LMAO.
She is CLUELESS.
Very good, as usual.
She is CLUELESS.
Very good, as usual.
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woo! I'm back and I've missed this story. Sorry for not reviewing for the last chapter, but I was out of town and the relatives didn't have internet (I was in agony for two weeks). Anyway, on to the review...
Chapter 33: Well damn. Kumiko's an idiot. I didn't particularly think she would be smart, as Sesshomaru was vehemently opposed to mating with her from the beginning, but even I didn't think she was that dumb. First, she burst into Sesshomaru's room like gangbusters, trying to figure out if he's in pain? Not her concern. Then she knocks his mate (and knows it is his mate, by the way) off him, when he is only partaking of those liberties allowed to mates? Not smart. Especially since she knocked Inuyasha onto their child. Then, after she's been told to get the hell out, she still persists and launches an attack against Inuyasha and Mizuki? Damn, that's one dumb bitch (pun intended).
I loved the beat down she and her father got. They both deserved it (I happen to know of another uppity wench that needs the air let out of her sails). Sesshomaru doesn't play with his family's safety, and I can't say I blame him.
Chapter 34: Trish makes me gag. She's clearly missing a few screws, living in denial and a dumb bitch. That she thought having sex with Vergil and getting pregnant with his baby would make Dante want her in beyond crazy. No, it's beyond sane. Clearly, she's lost her mind. Must have been Vergil's reappearance that did it, but she's certifiable. I can't wait until Vergil gets his hands on her because pregnant or not, he's going to rip her apart and that's no less than she deserves.
Kumiko needs to die. If she pulls something, I hope Inuyasha gets the privilege of killing her. She's annoying and obnoxious, and she thinks way too highly of herself. I agree with Yuudai and Toga's assessments--Sesshomaru would kill her within a day. She would annoy him and die, and that's how it should be. I hope whatever she's planning, she rediscovers her good sense and apologizes. I would hate to see bloodshed (totally lying here-- just so you know).
Good job, Nemesis. Can't wait to read more!
Chapter 33: Well damn. Kumiko's an idiot. I didn't particularly think she would be smart, as Sesshomaru was vehemently opposed to mating with her from the beginning, but even I didn't think she was that dumb. First, she burst into Sesshomaru's room like gangbusters, trying to figure out if he's in pain? Not her concern. Then she knocks his mate (and knows it is his mate, by the way) off him, when he is only partaking of those liberties allowed to mates? Not smart. Especially since she knocked Inuyasha onto their child. Then, after she's been told to get the hell out, she still persists and launches an attack against Inuyasha and Mizuki? Damn, that's one dumb bitch (pun intended).
I loved the beat down she and her father got. They both deserved it (I happen to know of another uppity wench that needs the air let out of her sails). Sesshomaru doesn't play with his family's safety, and I can't say I blame him.
Chapter 34: Trish makes me gag. She's clearly missing a few screws, living in denial and a dumb bitch. That she thought having sex with Vergil and getting pregnant with his baby would make Dante want her in beyond crazy. No, it's beyond sane. Clearly, she's lost her mind. Must have been Vergil's reappearance that did it, but she's certifiable. I can't wait until Vergil gets his hands on her because pregnant or not, he's going to rip her apart and that's no less than she deserves.
Kumiko needs to die. If she pulls something, I hope Inuyasha gets the privilege of killing her. She's annoying and obnoxious, and she thinks way too highly of herself. I agree with Yuudai and Toga's assessments--Sesshomaru would kill her within a day. She would annoy him and die, and that's how it should be. I hope whatever she's planning, she rediscovers her good sense and apologizes. I would hate to see bloodshed (totally lying here-- just so you know).
Good job, Nemesis. Can't wait to read more!
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
about teaser 35...
Older white-haired hanyou? Did I miss something??? Forget something?
Anyway about 34...
is it just me or are you being vague about the confrontation between Kumiko & Inuyasha or it just wasn't important?
Sooo...is our favorite Hanyou pregnant again? :-)
..and I take it that Kumiko's stupidity knows no leaps or bounds, it just constantly continues to grow at a vast degree.
Older white-haired hanyou? Did I miss something??? Forget something?
Anyway about 34...
is it just me or are you being vague about the confrontation between Kumiko & Inuyasha or it just wasn't important?
Sooo...is our favorite Hanyou pregnant again? :-)
..and I take it that Kumiko's stupidity knows no leaps or bounds, it just constantly continues to grow at a vast degree.
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this chapter helped wit finding out where that wench trish was, poor kumiko is she just asking to get her throat slit or what. i mean give it up. i cant wait to read what happens next chapter it seems mizuki and xander might become close friends. lol ok update soon and keep up the good writing
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1. Thought Inuyasha was going to give Kumiko the beat down?
-Hell Yeah!!! Pimp-slapped, bitch-slapped...and then kicked-to-the-curb HELLL YEAH!!
But Sesshomaru getting krunked was a nice touch also. All Hail The Killing Perfection!!!
2. Do you think that Kumiko survived being poisoned by Sesshoumaru?
-Personally, a little illness NEVER hurt anybody, but she needs a sore muscle or two. *wink* ;-)
3. By the way, whatever happened to Trish? Don’t know?
- Who gives a RAT'S ASS..I forgot all about her until you mentioned her. What's her purpose anyway besides to piss people off?!?
bye for now.
-Hell Yeah!!! Pimp-slapped, bitch-slapped...and then kicked-to-the-curb HELLL YEAH!!
But Sesshomaru getting krunked was a nice touch also. All Hail The Killing Perfection!!!
2. Do you think that Kumiko survived being poisoned by Sesshoumaru?
-Personally, a little illness NEVER hurt anybody, but she needs a sore muscle or two. *wink* ;-)
3. By the way, whatever happened to Trish? Don’t know?
- Who gives a RAT'S ASS..I forgot all about her until you mentioned her. What's her purpose anyway besides to piss people off?!?
bye for now.
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As always, your chappies are well worth the wait! So spoiled little princess got her comeuppance, eh? hehe
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
luved this chapter, i'm glad to see you have updated and it was worth the wait. wow, sesshy one point kumiko none, i hope she deteriorates from the poison kami knows she needs to for her impulsive act and rash judgement. she had to learn the hard way just like trish. and speaking of that whore wat happened to her and what wiil happen between her and dante when they meet. again great chapter and cant wait to read more.
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am glad to see more of ths can't wait for more I will have to check in to see if anymore updates happen since there is no email alerts.
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!! LUV IT!!!!!! another ch. please!!!! god ur awesome at this... can't wait to see wat happens!! by the way... two chs ago... who was in the twins' room when Viergal finished bathing?... oh yeah!! did u hear? one of the japanese animation companies is going to mak a anime version of Devil May Cry!!! can't wait!!! cya next ch.!!! ^_^
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