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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I've been reading your story on fanfiction.net, but I think I like reading it here a lot more!! Keep up the good work and update soon please because I can't wait for more!! ^_^
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SO...you turned around and gave the story ANOTHER twist. Kept it up and you'll turn it into a pretzel. :-)
But I'm glad you got some issues resolved & a couple of questions answered. Now we have...Nelo Angelo??? Shucks, I'm just waiting for the father/father/daughter reunion. :-/
But I'm glad you got some issues resolved & a couple of questions answered. Now we have...Nelo Angelo??? Shucks, I'm just waiting for the father/father/daughter reunion. :-/
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi This was the bomb!!!! I have never read a fanfic so well done and you have captured the characters so perfectly. Please continue cannot wait to see what happens next. Keep it coming
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was so cool. toga was awesome going up against the general
of hell's army. i would say i felt sorry for kumiko but i don't. i
just wish toga had did a bit more damage before nelo angelo showed up.
oh well, good things comes to those who wait. i mean, trish got hers in the
end. so that means kumiko is going to get hers. Right?
of hell's army. i would say i felt sorry for kumiko but i don't. i
just wish toga had did a bit more damage before nelo angelo showed up.
oh well, good things comes to those who wait. i mean, trish got hers in the
end. so that means kumiko is going to get hers. Right?
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yep! Toga was DEFINITELY awesome! So, next chapter should have a subdued somewhat back to normal Vergil? And....Kumiko is up to something else rotten?
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh Toga did the damn thing!! He's one bad ass he's too cool. I mean I know it's your story...BUT DID YOU SEE THAT!!!!! He came out like 'I'm Inu No Taishio BITCH! don't fuck with what mine' Ahhh I love it!!!! Oh and Sessy and Inu having to stop their "fun" for Mizuki was cute and funny...and yet I don't know how ya pulled it off. I've been reading for awhile and I never review cuz by the time I know you updated it late already. But LOOKIE ME *points to self* ON TIME YAY!!! Im new to yaoi yet it kicks ass with people like you who make it sinfully good. Please see through to the end...in other words UPDATE PLEASE I'LL MAKE YA A CAKE with a top like mines that says HENTAI 4LIFE!!!!!
ps. email me sometimes! bye bye *runs off*
ps. email me sometimes! bye bye *runs off*
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What did Nelo Angelo have to do with anything? I guess it does kind of make sense. This is getting better and better. *sits and waits patiently for the next chapter*
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo! Another great chapter! The Inu brothers have their daughter back, and if her first kill is any indication, little Mizuki is going to be vicious. I love it. Sesshomaru finally discovers his mate's pregnancy, which is a good thing because poor Inuyasha is going to need all the help he can get. The sex with Mizuki nearby was funny--the brothers were so completely in their own world that they forgot about their child.
Kumiko needs to hurry up and die. I hate her. She's annoying and whiny and just lame. I hope the teaser is indication that her time with us is almost over.
Poor Sesshomaru is injured. I don't know what to say about Vergil...so I shall say nothing. I will say that he owes everyone an apology.
Finally, I'm glad that Alex is finding out more info about her family. She may not want to know it, but she's snooping, so she has to take what she can get.
Kumiko needs to hurry up and die. I hate her. She's annoying and whiny and just lame. I hope the teaser is indication that her time with us is almost over.
Poor Sesshomaru is injured. I don't know what to say about Vergil...so I shall say nothing. I will say that he owes everyone an apology.
Finally, I'm glad that Alex is finding out more info about her family. She may not want to know it, but she's snooping, so she has to take what she can get.
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, i found your story and it looked very interesting. well, i was right! i loved it! not only did it have one of my favorite couplings, sess/inu, it had another yaoi pair as well, and it was great! here! *hands over a cookie* i loved it that much! i was a little confused at first, but after reading all 40 chapters in like an hour and a half, i figured out a few things on my own. i really liked this story, and can't wait for more chapters. i wonder though, is sparfda stil alive, and if so, will the twins' father make an appearance in this fic?
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just got done reading chapters 1 thru 22, and i have to say that this is such a gr8 & interesting story. It's was so sad how Inuyasha lose his babies, I hope that he will have more.
Koga was wrong for trying have sex with Inuyasha, which Inuyasha already belong to Sesshomaru, because after all they are mates. I think that so cute how Sesshomaru came to Inuyasha's rescue, i think he cares deeply for his mate. That must've really pissed (excuse my language, lol) Sesshomaru, becuz he nearly killed Koga, but thanx to Inuyasha, he didn't.
As for Trish, I think that Vergil and Dante better watch for her, becuz i don't think that she likes that Dante and his brother are lovers, and she's probably gonna try to stop Dante from divorcing her, but i hope that he does..'cos he and Vergil deserves to be together. Trish kind of remind of Kagome, i mean they both can't accept the fact that the ones the love, are in love with their brothers, but they're gonna have to get over it and move on.
JoB Well Done, ArchNemesis, I love your story. I can't wait finish reading the rest of it. :) :)
I love incest stories, i don't know why, i just do, lol. ;) ;) ;)
Koga was wrong for trying have sex with Inuyasha, which Inuyasha already belong to Sesshomaru, because after all they are mates. I think that so cute how Sesshomaru came to Inuyasha's rescue, i think he cares deeply for his mate. That must've really pissed (excuse my language, lol) Sesshomaru, becuz he nearly killed Koga, but thanx to Inuyasha, he didn't.
As for Trish, I think that Vergil and Dante better watch for her, becuz i don't think that she likes that Dante and his brother are lovers, and she's probably gonna try to stop Dante from divorcing her, but i hope that he does..'cos he and Vergil deserves to be together. Trish kind of remind of Kagome, i mean they both can't accept the fact that the ones the love, are in love with their brothers, but they're gonna have to get over it and move on.
JoB Well Done, ArchNemesis, I love your story. I can't wait finish reading the rest of it. :) :)
I love incest stories, i don't know why, i just do, lol. ;) ;) ;)