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Yet another wonderful chapter. I really can't tell you how much I enjoy reading this story. Toga's characterization is amusing, but somehow close to how I had pictured their father. I don't blame him for being upset about Naraku, something about him is just wrong. BTW--I liked the way you made the familial relations. Muso (or Onigumo) being Naraku's father is a close approximation to what actually happens in the anime. I can't wait for the Vergil/Naraku showdown; it seems like it's going to be bloody and violent, two of my favorite things. Thanks for your explanation on Inuyasha and Sesshomaru's mating, it made a lot of sense to me once I read it . The teaser, once again, has we waiting with bated breath. Hope you don't mind my rambles...good job!

I have to say that I think you handled their confrontation very well. It could have been a lot worse. It was explosive, but not overly emotional, and in the end, they remained friends. Yeah, Kagome said some mean things, but she was hurt and I think you got that across very well. I also like your explanation for why those two could never be together--she isn't strong enough for him. If he's a beta, he needs someone stronger than himself to be his mate, so anyone who considers him an alpha would automatically be too weak to mate him. I guess that also explains Koga as well (although I think Sesshomaru handled that one). I'm glad their friendship remained intact, and I can't wait for the next chapter. That teaser gets me every time :-).

whoa. next chapter sounds like its going to heat things up a bit. i liked this chapter, and its just how i thought it shuld be. now we just hav to worry about the other inu clans and wat our other new favorite demons will do. anyway update soon aand as always keep up the good writing.

This chapter was so sad, but well done. I think you captured Inuyasha's feelings after learning of the loss of his children, and Sesshomaru was well-written. I'm glad he admitted his true feelings to his brother because at a time like that, Inuyasha needed to hear and know that his mate loved him and wouldn't leave him. So sad that they lost all three of their children, but there will be other times. I'm wondering--did Inuyasha's intense desire to provide heirs for his brother (and thus enable him to remain with his mate) have any bearing on the ability to have children? Or was it the mating? The teaser, as always, leaves me rather impatient for the next chapter. Great update!

i like this chapter. it was so emotional, (sobs) but i know those two can get through this especially with each other. so inu finally confront kagome cant wait to read that. so update soon and sessh was so sweet. :)

Aw....man! What a place to end it. Good though, *sigh* I hope you can update again soon.

Wow...i've never really been one for crossovers but I really like this. I can't wait for your next update. Good luck writting with two kids. I know how hard it is( I have 3 all under 5), so close to impossible.

Nice one... I like... Update again when you have the chance...

luv this chapter. damn those sons of sparda luv making a mess in bed and kagome needs to get over it and leave inu/sessh and verge/dante alone before she ends up getting killed or worse. anyway i have a question that's been bugging me. will inu have another child, or will it be dante and verge? okay enough of my rambling good chapter and can't wait to read more.

Oh, it's getting good now. Those two brothers are some horny devils (bad pun intended). I'm glad that Vergil was successfully able to get his brother's thoughts off his dream and onto more pleasurable activities. Their sex is a little, violent, but since they're devils, I guess that is to be expected.

Sango, Miroku and Kagome overhearing them was just funny. Having heard people having sex many times (one of the perils of dorm living), I can sympathize; however, I didn't find it as disgusting as they did. I laughed at it because they were mortified when they found out we heard all their business (they shouldn't have screamed like banshees if they didn't want anyone to hear).

Kagome seems to be treading on dangerous ground. I know she loves Inuyasha, but she doesn't own him. If she doesn't watch out, she'll find herself on the business end of Sesshomaru's claws, and I won't feel sorry for her. She gives Inuyasha too little credit in his ability to make decisions for himself, something that she often does in the anime. It's as if she forgets that he's lived on his own for decades before he encountered either her or Kikyo. And since she knows him so well, she should know that Sesshomaru can't force Inuyasha into anything. If they're mates, it's because both of them wanted it.

I feel sorry for Sesshomaru and Inuyasha next chapter, if that teaser means anything. It's time for the truth, and it's most likely going to crush poor Inuyasha. Anyway, great update as usual!